Reviews for When Eyes Meet
Sylmarien chapter 2 . 10/7/2011
well this is looking good so far but please tell me Eriol is going to start speaking proper english soon. No offense to you or your writing cause that is spot on but i just have a hard time trying to imagine the cultured Eriol from CCS speaking like that *grins* but that just tells me about my lack of imagination doesn't it. :)
hikarihayashi-chan chapter 2 . 11/13/2010
like this concept!

i didnt quite like eriol talking in ...pirate language though.

haha, looking forward to the next chapter. :)
SnowCharms chapter 2 . 3/12/2010
Knowing his twisted mind, he would most likely decide to stay with her to have fun. That or use the chance to steal information. Update!
otan chapter 2 . 9/23/2009
Weh... it's so nice... hope you can update soon... can't wait for what's gonna next... thanks for writing this...
wirelia chapter 2 . 5/21/2009
Wow, nice chapter! Though I can't imagine Eriol looking like that, it was still very nice. Update soon! :)
cheng chapter 2 . 4/29/2009
hahahahaha. no way into a slave trader?
Wafflesz chapter 2 . 4/27/2009
LOL, sorry i just found the whole "I'll buy him" at the end absolutely hilarious. Oh, so much dramatic irony... LOVE IT.

update soon kay?
tomoyo-amethyst chapter 2 . 4/27/2009
Hm , i wonder what will happen if tomoyo found out abouthe truth .

UPDATE SOON .
high improbability chapter 2 . 4/27/2009
Aw/ I liked Eriol because of his perfect speaking skills. Oh well.
Winter Ink chapter 2 . 4/26/2009
wow. smart eriol. getting trapped by slave traders, of course beccuase he was trying to do something heroic. funny how even when in his uncomfortable siuation, he still can smile. i dont know why, my eriol's coming off as a smart ass to me when talking and smilieing to tomoyo. well not a smart ass. more of a "i know that you" ass, which i totally thought eriol was in the anime. so i believe you u captured some of eriol's essence. its inetresting so far. please be the authors that update soon, and not like months months later. can't wait to read the rest of your plot
Midnight Ghost chapter 2 . 4/26/2009
Yay! Confusing English!

Always fun to read! :D
tomoyo-amethyst chapter 1 . 4/25/2009
wow , seems interesting . Update soon alright (:
Midnight Ghost chapter 1 . 4/15/2009
Nice begining to the story!
cheng chapter 1 . 4/12/2009
i hope they meet up soon. update soon mkays?
Wafflesz chapter 1 . 4/11/2009
O I really like your plot, great opening. PLEASE update regularly unlike the majority of the ET writers.