|Reviews for Fated Men|
| Lord of Darkness13 chapter 2 . 6/28/2009
Very good, through me for a bit because it just kind of jumped into it without much explanation. But it worked and I am looking forward to the next chapter.
| tios chapter 2 . 6/28/2009
Now this sounds promising
| Lord of Darkness13 chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
A longer opening would have been better, however I love mythology so I am going to stick around and see where this goes. Update soon.
| Meteoricshipyards chapter 1 . 4/16/2009
Not enough here to determine if the story is going to be interesting. Why is Ron on azkaban? Guard or prisoner? If prisoner, why? And why should we care.
From a dramatic point of view, the chapter should be bigger.
Good luck with it. Hope it pans out.
| gwynhefar chapter 1 . 4/11/2009
Wow. You've got my attention.
| I-Am-Silence chapter 1 . 4/11/2009
Looks intersesting, A cool beggining.
| rosiegirl chapter 1 . 4/10/2009
Different start. Look forward to more