Reviews for The First Born
SilverWolfofSea chapter 10 . 4/15
jack sparrow
thats to damn cuteeee
Child of Dreams chapter 16 . 3/27
How can Bella get hurt?
She's a leech, for crying out loud!
KoKo chapter 31 . 2/14
This was a good story with a lot of potential, but then you went and made Renesmee, a seven year old, have a crush on a man you appears to be in his twenties and you lost me completely. That is so disgusting and wrong. I was upset when you made Nessie go from 5 to 7 but I'm even more upset about the creepy perv relationship going on between Nessie and Nahuel. I can completely understand Edwards anger. I'm done with this story.
miagrace chapter 41 . 1/12/2016
maria lauren chapter 41 . 6/8/2014
it's okay
stephcullen2000 chapter 41 . 5/9/2014
I love it so please update again soon x
Hemmo1996xx chapter 36 . 4/23/2014
Okay. Good book but renesmee is getting on my nerves. She is too winey and always has to get her way. And back there when she didn't want to get treated like a baby, when she is acting like one. and jakes promise was only he was going to the beach and then Ness had to create a huge scene. And nahuel is too old for Ness
Zj chapter 41 . 4/22/2014
Yay 400th comment! More update now?!
Zj chapter 41 . 4/22/2014
Please post more!
rebecca cullen chapter 41 . 12/4/2013
Great story but please cary on . i can't log on at the moment but my name is rebecca ann cullen.
jessicamakayla23 chapter 41 . 11/20/2013
Please update don't leave us hanging.
jessicamakayla23 chapter 18 . 11/20/2013
Why didn't Jake feel Nessie hurt or in trouble?
jessicamakayla23 chapter 8 . 11/20/2013
Good job.
jessicamakayla23 chapter 7 . 11/20/2013
I love this story..
Astrid Phoenix chapter 41 . 9/13/2013
can't wait for the next chapter. i wonder what alice's visions about ness are about, and the reason behind them? please update! :)
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