Reviews for The First Born
maria lauren chapter 41 . 6/8/2014
it's okay
stephcullen2000 chapter 41 . 5/9/2014
I love it so please update again soon x
Hemmo1996xx chapter 36 . 4/23/2014
Okay. Good book but renesmee is getting on my nerves. She is too winey and always has to get her way. And back there when she didn't want to get treated like a baby, when she is acting like one. and jakes promise was only he was going to the beach and then Ness had to create a huge scene. And nahuel is too old for Ness
Zj chapter 41 . 4/22/2014
Yay 400th comment! More update now?!
Zj chapter 41 . 4/22/2014
Please post more!
rebecca cullen chapter 41 . 12/4/2013
Great story but please cary on . i can't log on at the moment but my name is rebecca ann cullen.
jessicamakayla23 chapter 41 . 11/20/2013
Please update don't leave us hanging.
jessicamakayla23 chapter 18 . 11/20/2013
Why didn't Jake feel Nessie hurt or in trouble?
jessicamakayla23 chapter 8 . 11/20/2013
Good job.
jessicamakayla23 chapter 7 . 11/20/2013
I love this story..
Astrid Phoenix chapter 41 . 9/13/2013
can't wait for the next chapter. i wonder what alice's visions about ness are about, and the reason behind them? please update! :)
TrueFact7 chapter 7 . 8/1/2013
I get that Jacob was just joking...but I still dont think that he would even think about him marrying Bella after he imprinted on Nessie
TrueFact7 chapter 4 . 8/1/2013
Great chappy! love it!
TrueFact7 chapter 2 . 8/1/2013
Edward reacted just the way I think he would have.
And So The Lion Fell In Love chapter 41 . 7/3/2013
I just started reading this story yesterday already finished I can't wait for the next chapter keep up the good work I love it but I just feel that ness is being too whiny in the books she is a little mixture than that but anyways I love it
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