|Reviews for The First Born|
| rebecca cullen chapter 41 . 12/4/2013
Great story but please cary on . i can't log on at the moment but my name is rebecca ann cullen.
| Mrs. NessieBlackCullen chapter 41 . 11/20/2013
Please update don't leave us hanging.
| Mrs. NessieBlackCullen chapter 18 . 11/20/2013
Why didn't Jake feel Nessie hurt or in trouble?
| Mrs. NessieBlackCullen chapter 8 . 11/20/2013
| Mrs. NessieBlackCullen chapter 7 . 11/20/2013
I love this story..
| Astrid Phoenix chapter 41 . 9/13/2013
can't wait for the next chapter. i wonder what alice's visions about ness are about, and the reason behind them? please update! :)
| TrueFact7 chapter 7 . 8/1/2013
I get that Jacob was just joking...but I still dont think that he would even think about him marrying Bella after he imprinted on Nessie
| TrueFact7 chapter 4 . 8/1/2013
Great chappy! love it!
| TrueFact7 chapter 2 . 8/1/2013
Edward reacted just the way I think he would have.
| And So The Lion Fell In Love chapter 41 . 7/3/2013
I just started reading this story yesterday already finished I can't wait for the next chapter keep up the good work I love it but I just feel that ness is being too whiny in the books she is a little mixture than that but anyways I love it
| CrazeeMeManga chapter 41 . 6/28/2013
Ooh, so happy and excited for the upcoming chapters! I really can't wait, and I'm so excited to see where the story goes.
Really, absolutely loving it!
| Anne Shirley Cullen chapter 41 . 6/27/2013
so love this chapter got a few typos sent a pm for one and another one I caught is SHOULD instead of COULD. I really enjoy the story.
| GothicPheonix chapter 41 . 6/21/2013
I'm still interested and your doctor is right, any kind of art or writing is a way to relieve stress. I hope you are feeling better.
| Breathless In Voice chapter 40 . 5/31/2013
Why haven't you updated OMG! Please I love this story soooooo much!
I'm in college too I feel ur pain but PWEASE!
It's so good!
| DivergentHungerGamesAddict chapter 40 . 4/1/2013
That was a great chapter but write fast