Reviews for Rainfall
Tj chapter 1 . 10/12/2010
oh my made me cry!

"Brigadier General Hughes. He almost laughed at the absurdity of it. Two ranks higher and two meters below the ground.

And it rained later that day like it couldn't not, drops running down his cheeks on a cloud-free day with the sun burning high in the sky like a furnace, and he wondered why the heavens weren't crying with him."

The piece you wrote with hughes is particularly heart-touching. just. wow.
Disastergirl chapter 1 . 5/11/2010
Why does this not have more reviews? It was amazing, absolutely perfect. Such a clever idea and really well executed, I love your writing style.
Xinarie chapter 1 . 4/11/2009
Even if you don't like it, I do, especially the end.

Except it's blood. But again, we can argue about that later to-day.