Reviews for When I saw you for the very first time
indiananshu chapter 4 . 6/21/2009

aww, sorry abt the book!

please update soon!

really like this stry and wanna know what happens!


p.s- could you please do me a favour, smack sara really hard on her head and tell her that i asked you to do that!


Difficult-notImpossible chapter 4 . 6/9/2009
Even though there's only a proloug and one chapter...I feel that this story is definatly going somewhere. You have a lot of potential. I'm sorry about your notebook and I hope you find it so you could post the next chapter of this story as soon as you can! Your really good.
Raspberries45 chapter 4 . 5/22/2009

don't worry... take ur time. I hope you get it back!
Medea's Revenge chapter 4 . 5/21/2009
lol kieran obvs did it hehe

y would she steal it though ?

do u want me too ask her about it and buy ask i mean pumble ?

lol coz just say the word or i guess its 2 words pumble her

anyway im rambeling very angry about your book GR (see me angry) :D

soph x
pen2paper93 chapter 4 . 5/21/2009

She did!

I know who you are talking about!


That's out.

I'll destroy her art projects if she did!

Haha no coursework will remain after I'm finished with it.


Medea's Revenge chapter 3 . 5/12/2009
bout bloody time jasmine ! lool

soph ;D
Bethany Cullen chapter 3 . 5/2/2009
very good
Raspberries45 chapter 3 . 5/2/2009
sure, cant wait to
Shashaaaaa chapter 2 . 4/26/2009

this is vairr good (:

keep writing or ima keep bugging you to write.

write write write.



indiananshu chapter 2 . 4/26/2009

its me (anshu)

yep i loved it and i m gonna continue reading.

one question though, u said Bella is new then how she already knows about Alice and Rosalie.

well probably i will come to know in next chapter.

keep up the great work

missstrawberries chapter 2 . 4/22/2009
awesome chapter, thanks for the shout out, loving this!

(sorry i havent replied with my account, i havent got time to log in...)

pen2paper93 chapter 2 . 4/22/2009
Hello Jasmine!

I know I've told you what I think of this chapter at school but I will write it also on fanfic.

It's amazing as is the rest of the story (which I read most of at school)

It' so so so so so good and I can't wait for more!

One of the bestest stories, excluding mine. I'M JOKING! Mine is terrible but yours is awesome. Hehe.

See ya soon me dear.
pen2paper93 chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
Wow awesome prologue then again I read it in school before it was put up on fanfic. Still, it sounds so good and philosophical.

I can't wait for the rest of the chapter although I've also already read most of the ones you've done at the moment. I'm so lucky, their amazing!

To anyone reading this review who isn't Jasmine, continue to read the story it's so good. I'm hooked on it.

Haha I will keep bugging you at school to keep writing.

See you later me dear, I can't wait to read more.

Sara x
Raspberries45 chapter 1 . 4/11/2009
can't wait to start reading the story :D