|Reviews for School Rivals|
| Jake Rose chapter 2 . 9/8/2013
write the remaining chapters soon. i love this story
| iSmile9t5 chapter 2 . 7/5/2010
can't wait to read the rest :) !
| alybieber chapter 2 . 5/8/2010
The bone is good but the skin could use some improving. You need more description and exciting words. Just try improving
| Bored Secretary chapter 2 . 1/17/2010
um kinda short... okay, i guess... good story but really short and not written in the best way...
| Sem chapter 2 . 11/16/2009
HEy i really loved your first 2 chapters Brillant please keep writing it looks like it would make an awesome book i wanna know what happens next xoxo
| let-darkness-come chapter 2 . 6/30/2009
it was good but i think its just a little played out and is't a little soon for revenge with the new girl i mean its her first day and all
| Edward cullen is my hero chapter 2 . 6/14/2009
Please update as soon as possible.
Read mine too please!
| My-School-Stories chapter 1 . 6/4/2009
Hey this story was great :) but you did a mistake
at the part where it says
"Its Katie, not Kathy, and I heard you say I look as nice as a dumpster diver," I replied.
I think its meant to be the other way around because the popular girl called her katie (which is probably the wrong name) and Kathy's correcting nothing.
| Bubbles54 chapter 1 . 4/11/2009
Hey :) great start for a story.
In the second last paragraph. . . Is her name kathy or katie?
U might wanna fix that x