Reviews for School Rivals
Jake Rose chapter 2 . 9/8/2013
write the remaining chapters soon. i love this story
iSmile9t5 chapter 2 . 7/5/2010
can't wait to read the rest :) !
alybieber chapter 2 . 5/8/2010
The bone is good but the skin could use some improving. You need more description and exciting words. Just try improving
SMARTCUTEFUNNYXD chapter 2 . 1/17/2010
um kinda short... okay, i guess... good story but really short and not written in the best way...
Sem chapter 2 . 11/16/2009
HEy i really loved your first 2 chapters Brillant please keep writing it looks like it would make an awesome book i wanna know what happens next xoxo
let-darkness-come chapter 2 . 6/30/2009
it was good but i think its just a little played out and is't a little soon for revenge with the new girl i mean its her first day and all
Edward cullen is my hero chapter 2 . 6/14/2009
Please update as soon as possible.

Read mine too please!

Amanda ]
My-School-Stories chapter 1 . 6/4/2009
Hey this story was great :) but you did a mistake

at the part where it says

"Its Katie, not Kathy, and I heard you say I look as nice as a dumpster diver," I replied.

I think its meant to be the other way around because the popular girl called her katie (which is probably the wrong name) and Kathy's correcting nothing.
Bubbles54 chapter 1 . 4/11/2009
Hey :) great start for a story.

In the second last paragraph. . . Is her name kathy or katie?

U might wanna fix that x