Reviews for Mirror, Mirror
theajsmaster chapter 1 . 3/24
Very intresting story, I like it very much. The heat between Sebastian and Ciel is amazing!
FallenAngel1129 chapter 1 . 1/31
I'm fighting two battles in me right now...one being...oh yes much smut very porn. The other being that guy sitting in a large wingback chair smoking a pipe muttering about the deep spiritual meaning f "the bond"
Guest chapter 1 . 9/20/2013
I am so loving this.
GirlyAnonymous chapter 1 . 8/13/2013
Wow...This is AMAZING!...so far. You are truly a very talented writer. Eh, I uh, am a bit confused though. Okay so I haven't even read half of this so maybe i shouldn't judge. I promise i'll read the whole thing and give you a good review praising your mad skillz! Anywho, the trasition into the forplay was so sudden and made me think Dafaq? Lol, it was all getting pretty intense and melancholic? then out of nowhere Sebastian's giving Ciel a handjob. Seriously!? How did that even happen? Ciel was kind of having a moment and suddenly he's got an erection...meh, idk it just kind of threw me off and broke the steady natural flow of the story...Buuuut I guess you're not going to add a better transition and fill the gap even if i request it cause i see you wrote this a couple years ago? so, uhhh, keep up that good work!
Kiheada.Ray.T chapter 1 . 6/21/2013
That was adorable. I like how it had a plot to it! And a nice one, too :)
Dani chapter 1 . 4/14/2013
I...I don't understand
how can this be so beautiful and hot at the same time?
just...HOW?
how can you do that?

I think this is my new favorite fic
xRayneBloodx chapter 1 . 4/4/2013
Hey!
This was definitely one of the best Kuroshitsuji fics I've read yet! I, like many Kuroshitsuji fans, love this pairing, but many people write Ciel as a helpless Uke and I can't stand that. This was perfect, they were both IC, although Sebastian was a little weird at some points...
I was a little confused though when Sebastian was 'wrapping his hand around Ciel's erection'. I'm not sure if I was just being a little absent-minded and I probably was, but I don't think that part was clear. Feel free to tell me I just wasn't paying attention xP
Otherwise, really enjoyable and believable.
-Rayne
Petra Jade chapter 1 . 11/29/2012
First and foremost, I have NEVER reviewed smut before. Ever. It never seemed worthwhile to me since all written smut is basically the same. You have one of three endings: the two fall in love, the two never see each other again, one dies. An unexplainable amount of Seb/Ciel fics end like that, and it drives me mad. For one, the series is NOT about romance, two, Sebastian has shown no real interest is being with anyone, three, sex has very little to do with romance.

That being sad there's another side of Kuro fics that I have a hard time with as well: loveless sex. While I can understand it, it still upsets me. What I found here pleased me enough to leave a review. I found a blessed compromise between yaoi fangirls and realistic cannon. No outright love confessions, just the subtle relationship shown in series; I think I may just love you. It was beautifully handled and put together, and the blend of Ciel's stubbornness and his need for his bond to Sebastian was beautifully handled here. I immensely enjoyed the viewpoint of the mark connecting their souls, since it makes sense. And the idea of "soul mates," while not uncommon in Kuro fandom, was freshly viewed here. And what Sebastian said about demons eating souls to try and fill the hole in theirs? I ate it up like a fat kid with cake.

I would LOVE to see you expand on that idea with the same dark beauty you put to this one. I would also love to see what other dark ideas you come up with, such as what would happen to Ciel once he's eaten? Hannah didn't "digest" Luca and Alois, she made them apart of herself. What if Sebastian did the same? Just an idea to throw out.

Anyway, thank you for a truly beautiful piece that wasn't all about the sex. I definitely look forward to your future works of written art.

Petra Jade
Cali18love chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
Just the WRITTING was a amazing, honestly this could be any couple and I would still find this story so amazing.
Seb cracked me up XD
Beautiful story!
iloooveinuyasha1 chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
Delightful. Sinful and elegantly written. You have captured the characters wonderfully. It was a decadent read. Thank you for writing it, it was quite amazing.
There were but a few lines that weren't quite what I was expecting, but they added to the charm of the piece.
Again, thank you for this little indulgence.
Ja ne!

P.S. As I know you will probably read this review first, would you be so kind as so start with the reviews I have posted first. Makes a little more sense that way. Thank you.
Yaoi-lover413 chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
Really nice :D
I especially liked how you melted the lemon into everything else. It set a different pace, coz let's face it, lemons tend to be very alike xD
That chick chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
This story was awesome, I enjoyed it wayy to much for my own good!

XD keep it up!
Sessytrancy7 chapter 1 . 6/1/2012
This is seriously beautifully done...you did an amazing job! .
Kitten Meru chapter 1 . 5/11/2012
Not sure if it was because I read this while very tired, but after I finished reading this I was left thinking "... Alright. What just happened?"

In any case, I loved it. Leaves me with unanswerable questions and I'm unusually bothered by this, but maybe I'm tired. Still, I love this a lot.
KuroiTama chapter 1 . 5/8/2012
I love the way you wrote this, you took a simple request for porn and created something much deeper and more meaningful. A lovely read.
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