|Reviews for Breakdown|
| TTSonicanimal chapter 1 . 2/21
I think you should make another chapter to this story. No offense, but it kinda leaves you at a dead end.
| Silaya Arctic Prower chapter 1 . 12/6/2013
sword dont cry u can have my katana! *holds up weapon and hisses to pen* just in case be ready to run!
| bluerozelovetruth chapter 1 . 7/16/2013
I thought this was romance you jackass
| Brandname chapter 1 . 5/23/2012
"Look, you knew right from the start that we couldn't get involved with anybody. It would just be too big of a risk," Logic said.
THEN TELL HER THAT.
God damn, angst is stupid.
| Chips Dip chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
It was really cute :) u should continue!
| InvaderMazda chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
Kelly: *sniff* I-i'm crying!
Cooky: *pats her back* It's okay... Don't be sad.
Kelly: *lifts head up* GRRRR! I'M GONNA KILL YOU EGGMAN! *runs toward his base*
Cooky&Darkness: 0_0... -_-;
| Bluehorse14 chapter 1 . 12/9/2010
This is good. I can appreciate a story like this but at the same time i like happy endings. But still really good job
| 01SonAmy01 chapter 1 . 6/3/2010
wow that was really good X3
i personally prefer happy endings but u cant always have them, can you? u need a sad one once in a while.
i like :D
| SugarhogRose chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
Yeah, I think I agree with Sword- '(
So sad, yet sweet that he doesn't want her hurt.
Another fantastic story! Keep it up D
| Alyssacookie chapter 1 . 11/28/2009
I'm with sword on this one. Angst is so sad; not a big fan. Well written though. Now, where was I? Oh yeah! -hugs pen- WAH!
| megaboy50 chapter 1 . 9/23/2009
hm its okay but i dont really like how sad poor amy is and also...SONICS LOGIC IS EVIL!
| Cataclyptic chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
Excellent. I like the conflict that pesents itself.
| SonicROX1998 chapter 1 . 7/22/2009
Why don't you make a sequal? Where Sonic follows his heart one day? But don't make a cheesy middle where 'Eggman's robotic hand came out and grabbed Amy' , Those are getting old... -_-'
| Tempest of Reach chapter 1 . 4/23/2009
Story? ... Not so great...
| RaeRaethehedgehog chapter 1 . 4/19/2009
Hey I liked the way this turned out. It's a cool story and you ended it in a good way actually.