|Reviews for The Chaos Users|
| seeker of true anime fan fic chapter 19 . 1/7/2014
Hey when u gonna update this man want to see how naruto deals with metal and meets and gets the other girls namely sally fiona bunnie mina sonia wave and blaze man i hope this year it comes back up seeker has spoken
| ndavid chapter 10 . 5/2/2013
| the naru foxxx chapter 4 . 12/22/2012
so naruto is a half demon so he has the fox ears dose he have 9 fox tails as well speeking of tails your calling Tails nibi right because that's kind of confusing because thers a naruto character named nibi and the story semes a little to disjointed but that's not to say its bad just that I could use some thighting up
| the naru foxxx chapter 3 . 12/22/2012
OMG naruto and tails starting a family would be spoon cute! I'd love to read that story
| cybirddude chapter 19 . 11/8/2012
Since Topaz is gonna be in the harem, does that mean you'll put more Sonic X characters in here?
| Lucky Ryuujin chapter 19 . 6/28/2012
Please update soon. I really want to know who else will be in Naruto's harem and what other games you'll be novelizing. Thank you.
| Gui chapter 19 . 1/27/2012
Maybe you should add Vanilla and an older Cream to the harem so Naruto can get the rabbit trio.
| masterart chapter 19 . 11/12/2011
i have sonic heroes but never got to finshed i hope you can wirte more oh sonic generations is in store now
| Awsomeness7 chapter 9 . 5/5/2011
hey did you notice that this chapter is kinda like gohan vs. cell from dragon ball? cause its super saiyen 2 gohan vs perfect cell and here its super sonic vs perfect chaos!
| naruhina fan chapter 19 . 1/11/2011
Think you can update a chapter? As in the next level of Sonic Heroes? Oh, and I got a manga crossover challenge for ya: NarutoxElfen Lied. These are the requirements:
1) Pairing is NarutoxHarem (of course); harem must have Lucy/Nyu, Nana, and Mariko from Elfen Lied at least; do what you want for the other girls
2) Must follow manga minus the death of certain characters, such as Lucy and Mariko; you can choose to have the other characters live
3) Must have guns that use bullets made of chakra
4) Must take place in Narutoverse
5) Naruto can still be godlike, but not because he has every bloodline you can think of; give him one bloodline at the most
6) This must be a separate story from your other story series such as Unleashed since it will actually take place in the Naruto-verse
7) Naruto cannot experience with Lucy the negative shit that Kohta did; only the love Lucy has for him
8) Most importantly, Naruto doesn't hate Lucy since she didn't kill his family, nor does he have an incestuous cousin like Yuka; you can still give him an incestuous cousin or sibling, just no Yuka
9) Lucy must still have her Nyu personality
10) Story can start whenever, so long as Elfen Lied canon is fused with Naruto canon, i.e. they finish off Kakuzawa and his followers during the Search for Tsunade Arc
Long as those requirements are met, have fun! Can't wait to see the lemons you cook up for that story should you choose to make it; two extra sets of hands, or in Mariko's case, sixteen, even if they're invisible or translucent in Mariko's case, open a lot of possibilities...I think.
| blah chapter 19 . 1/9/2011
continue, this story is getting very interesting :)
| XIII-Kuro Neko chapter 10 . 12/12/2010
that was in awsome chapter
| Kiyoushu chapter 5 . 10/20/2010
Kyuubi don't listen to those trolls they just be hatin
| Andonexus KotD chapter 9 . 9/1/2010
NICE JOB ON THE SONIC ADVENTURE PART OF YOUR STORY!
| naruhina chapter 17 . 8/28/2010
yo ushould added hinata to the harem