|Reviews for Destruction of a World|
| Vitani chapter 1 . 12/2/2009
I thought this was a great little character study! It's nice to find something serious and emotionally-deep. I prefer angst-ridden and depressing, so I enjoyed your look into Farfarello's mind. Thanks!
On a technical level, watch out for run-on sentences; I got tripped up several times while reading this. There were one or two misspelled words, missing commas, and some basic bad grammar. Don't be afraid to let your stories sit, and then go back for a final edit!
You don't need another chapter. It's a great stand-alone one-shot. But maybe you could write a brief character study for the other Schwarz? _