|Reviews for Element of Surprise|
| XXhannahpXX chapter 2 . 12/28/2009
really good! i think you should keep most in bella's POV and you can sometimes do others to show their feelings and thoughts. Update soon!
| AshesToAshes chapter 2 . 4/21/2009
This is seriously the first Twilight fic I found that I actually like! So far at least... jk.
As for advice on the POV, I say keep it in Bella's as much as possible, and only change it when something has to be realized from someone else's eyes.
Keep up the good work and write more ASAP! ]
| Mommys-Little-Nightmare chapter 2 . 4/15/2009
Hey great update!
as long as you say who's POV your switching to then i do't think there will be a problem. :D
| Mommys-Little-Nightmare chapter 1 . 4/11/2009
really like this 1st chapter.