Reviews for Ness's Dirty Secret
Guest chapter 1 . 12/19/2014
Please make a female nessxlucas plot lucas find is ness a girl and start to fell in love but ness doesn't like being a girl and still wear boys clothes and not have breast.. anyway lucas is shy and try to get ness to feel the same.
Ness age 13
Lucas age 13
Fluff Lemon
Romance friendship
I hope you like my request please make it :(
Oh and claus must be in there please
bearvalley3365 chapter 1 . 7/21/2013
I think it was quite interesting indeed.
Fighting Robots mb7 and mb6 chapter 1 . 3/7/2012
Good story but chouldnt ness talport to falco? he got that abitily
tothearkNULL chapter 1 . 1/9/2010
Ness: WTH?

Paula: SICKO! GAWD! You sir or ma'am are sick.

Ness: THAT WAS INSULTING! JERK!

Falco: That is... THERE ISN'T A WORD FOR THAT, SICKO!
GiratinaB chapter 1 . 7/20/2009
0.O
Alxai chapter 1 . 4/16/2009
i just love the idea of ness being a girl :D
ElementUchihaMaster chapter 1 . 4/15/2009
o.O you made ness a girl?
Miss Jigglypuff chapter 1 . 4/13/2009
lol!
Chilltown chapter 1 . 4/12/2009
I was WAITING for a fanfic to use the bread joke! xD
pika123 chapter 1 . 4/12/2009
this story was funny XD but slightly weird but awesome job as always ;)
The Great Chicken Miasma chapter 1 . 4/11/2009
Oh, wow. This is like a one-shot version of a story I did on Lucas being a girl. I can't see Ness as a girl himself, so this was a really good crackfic in that sense.

Love the Chicken!

~C. Miasma
Sir NZ chapter 1 . 4/11/2009
I liked this story, especially when Falco beat the snot out of that boy/girl Ness!

But I agree with you, the brawl boards on gamefaqs are not a place for the weak of heart, although they make the funniest fads.
The GamerSwordsman chapter 1 . 4/11/2009
Well, that was certainly interesting and slightly creepy.

But still funny...I think. Anyway I suppose that's it really. NIce job.