|Reviews for Ness's Dirty Secret|
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/19/2014
Please make a female nessxlucas plot lucas find is ness a girl and start to fell in love but ness doesn't like being a girl and still wear boys clothes and not have breast.. anyway lucas is shy and try to get ness to feel the same.
Ness age 13
Lucas age 13
I hope you like my request please make it :(
Oh and claus must be in there please
| bearvalley3365 chapter 1 . 7/21/2013
I think it was quite interesting indeed.
| Fighting Robots mb7 and mb6 chapter 1 . 3/7/2012
Good story but chouldnt ness talport to falco? he got that abitily
| tothearkNULL chapter 1 . 1/9/2010
Paula: SICKO! GAWD! You sir or ma'am are sick.
Ness: THAT WAS INSULTING! JERK!
Falco: That is... THERE ISN'T A WORD FOR THAT, SICKO!
| GiratinaB chapter 1 . 7/20/2009
| Alxai chapter 1 . 4/16/2009
i just love the idea of ness being a girl :D
| ElementUchihaMaster chapter 1 . 4/15/2009
o.O you made ness a girl?
| Miss Jigglypuff chapter 1 . 4/13/2009
| Chilltown chapter 1 . 4/12/2009
I was WAITING for a fanfic to use the bread joke! xD
| pika123 chapter 1 . 4/12/2009
this story was funny XD but slightly weird but awesome job as always ;)
| The Great Chicken Miasma chapter 1 . 4/11/2009
Oh, wow. This is like a one-shot version of a story I did on Lucas being a girl. I can't see Ness as a girl himself, so this was a really good crackfic in that sense.
Love the Chicken!
| Sir NZ chapter 1 . 4/11/2009
I liked this story, especially when Falco beat the snot out of that boy/girl Ness!
But I agree with you, the brawl boards on gamefaqs are not a place for the weak of heart, although they make the funniest fads.
| The GamerSwordsman chapter 1 . 4/11/2009
Well, that was certainly interesting and slightly creepy.
But still funny...I think. Anyway I suppose that's it really. NIce job.