Reviews for Forever, I Fear
Guest chapter 1 . 1/5/2017
Spell out numbers less than 100. 1/3 looks bad (and is incorrect anyways). It's should be spelled out one-third. And 6 widgets should be six widgets. Or whatever it is that you're counting.
IGOTEAMEDWARD chapter 11 . 8/4/2016
Blair.Victoria chapter 11 . 5/29/2015
That was such a beautiful proposal Elt and Draco made! Really nice story
Annoyed Guest chapter 11 . 5/3/2015
This story had such potential, the sentence structure needs improvements. Hermione is very, very out of character. Hermione claims to have have feelings for Ron after all that he has done to her. Harry is unprofessional in asking Hermione and to help in the investigation even though they have their training and I understand it's too move the plot line along. Grammer and spelling errors need improvement. Disappointing.
hjm1219 chapter 11 . 2/14/2015
Great story concept. Once you master the English language, you will do even better. Perhaps have someone help you translate?
Raulf chapter 3 . 7/16/2013
I have been rejected by my wife after 3 years of marriage just because another man and she left me and the kid to suffer. One day when i was reading through the web site, i saw a post on how this spell caster on this address Balo a spell helped a woman to get back her husband and i gave him a reply to his email address and he told me that a man cast a spell on my wife and he told me that he will help me and after 3 days that i will have my wife back. I believed him because of his polite approach and sincerity and today i am glad to let you all know that this spell caster have the power to bring lovers back because i am now happy with my wife.
PastHopingFor chapter 11 . 4/14/2013
That was so freaking adorable and perfect! I love love LOVED Elt. He was amazing and cute and ahhhh, I have no proper words. This story was romantic and funny with a little angst and I love it!
rvanderzwaag17 chapter 11 . 3/2/2013
The proposal with both Eltanin and Draco was beautiful, brought tears to my eyes.
lovemya2000 chapter 11 . 2/16/2013
Good story. Do you think if Blaise tried to Avada El then the same thing that happened with Harrys mom would have happened. Im not sure if you were aware but James is older than Albus in canon. Im not sure if you mixed up the two names, or explained why Teddy was with Harry and Ginny instead of his grandmother, Andromeda? It never said if or how they adopted them or what. Also a good punch in the face to Blaise as payback would have been nice. Other than those nice story
Guest chapter 4 . 12/29/2012
moving 2 fast
Mila Pink chapter 11 . 11/25/2012
I loved the story.
Elt's so cute.
Hayley chapter 6 . 10/9/2012
Thank you so much for writing this fan fiction. You are an amazing writer. And I even cried reading this. Keep writing! hayleyree
Guest chapter 11 . 8/9/2012
Cute. I loved the ending where Elt gave her the ring.
I enjoyed your story and I hope there are more to come with Dramione stories!
jtnnguyen chapter 11 . 7/13/2012
Wow! That was amazing! :)
I got teary there at the end. Major fluff.
I love how you developed their relationship.
I also liked that you made Daphne saved Eltanin showin that she truly loved him.
Good job!
irianaceleste chapter 11 . 6/14/2012
Beautiful story! I loved all the twists... But wait... Where'd her parents go?
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