|Reviews for Forever, I Fear|
| jeevesandwooster chapter 2 . 4/13/2009
Ooh, intrigue. Very exciting.
I adore your characterization of Draco. It's very impressive to me that you took pains to make him human, but still be the "old" Draco around Hermione. Subtle is good, and you're great at it.
| Lucy chapter 2 . 4/13/2009
Here's your cookie that was great infact it was FRICKEN AWESOME lol XD
| ally leigh chapter 2 . 4/13/2009
I love the drama of this chapter...and Elt is too cute. Can't wait for more.
| properrationality chapter 1 . 4/12/2009
i want to know what happens next! please update soon!
| Yusuke Urameshi - Mazoku chapter 1 . 4/12/2009
aw the kid is just too cute
| jeevesandwooster chapter 1 . 4/12/2009
Aw. Cute. Love the name Eltanin. It's clever, fits Draco's natural egotism, and is super-cute. (Much better than Scorpius anyway).
Also, you had a great starting point. I particularly appreciate that there was no instant attraction or anything. Very believable characters.
I do have one question though. It seems to be a post-DH, A/U of epilogue kind of thing...I'm glad (as I said above) that you changed Scorpius' name...but why did you erase James' existence altogether? Teddy was there (and I love that he was present as Harry and Ginny's son...I rather thought they should adopt him, it suits Harry's character to do so) and so was Albus. Why not James? Minor thing, though. Can't say I was fond enough of the epilogue to care if you completely screw with it.
Can't wait for more.
| ally leigh chapter 1 . 4/12/2009
I love fics where Draco has a kid and then gets together with Hermione. I think that this story is off to a great start, and I can't wait for more.