Reviews for Forever, I Fear
Yusuke Urameshi - Mazoku chapter 1 . 4/12/2009
aw the kid is just too cute
jeevesandwooster chapter 1 . 4/12/2009
Aw. Cute. Love the name Eltanin. It's clever, fits Draco's natural egotism, and is super-cute. (Much better than Scorpius anyway).

Also, you had a great starting point. I particularly appreciate that there was no instant attraction or anything. Very believable characters.

I do have one question though. It seems to be a post-DH, A/U of epilogue kind of thing...I'm glad (as I said above) that you changed Scorpius' name...but why did you erase James' existence altogether? Teddy was there (and I love that he was present as Harry and Ginny's son...I rather thought they should adopt him, it suits Harry's character to do so) and so was Albus. Why not James? Minor thing, though. Can't say I was fond enough of the epilogue to care if you completely screw with it.

Can't wait for more.

:)

Wooster
ally leigh chapter 1 . 4/12/2009
I love fics where Draco has a kid and then gets together with Hermione. I think that this story is off to a great start, and I can't wait for more.
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