Reviews for Your Move
countrylovinfangirl chapter 1 . 10/5
Amazing! I love it a lot!
Jd-dox chapter 1 . 9/27
I don't think Hermione planned for the mind reading chess peaces to act out sexual fantasies...
shadowfurie chapter 1 . 9/15
Never knew chess could be so exciting ;)
noraily chapter 1 . 5/11
That is the living proof of Hermione's genious ! Brilliant ! And bloody funny !
SammieSouza chapter 1 . 4/8
I read this story the first time a while back, and was so glad to find it again
This story is hilarious and interesting.
Clairissa chapter 1 . 12/31/2014
Reynadraki chapter 1 . 10/12/2014
es genial, me encanto!
Floreana chapter 1 . 8/6/2014
Great! very cool idea i think hermione did that on purpose
gummygirl chapter 1 . 7/18/2014
That was an awesome story :)
Roselina4389 chapter 1 . 7/16/2014
Meh. It was good. I blushed and smirked was really well written. You should continue with another one-shot. Keep writing.
1.1.1.G.1.1.1 chapter 1 . 6/25/2014
That was freaking adorable.

Also, it's been said more than once, but I'll say it again...Hermoine is one scary smart

Thanks for sharing.
PiptheSnake chapter 1 . 4/14/2014
... Those are some awkward chess pieces...
Yuni Li chapter 1 . 4/7/2014
Hi! I read your story today and really liked it, could I get your permission to translate it to Chinese please. I will quote your name and web link to your story if I post the translated version on any sites. Thank you :)
TrisanaChandler13 chapter 1 . 3/31/2014
I love the chess game! It reminds me of Unicorn Variation by Roger Zelazny, except that the cheese game in that is to save the human race.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/12/2014
holy fuck
nice chess game!
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