|Reviews for Dirty Old Men|
| Asha chapter 38 . 3/2
This is the funniest shit ever! I'm really loving this pairing...
| Saliere chapter 38 . 2/20
I would roll over and beg for just one more chapter. This is amazing. Fabulously hilarious - I don't think I've ever laughed so much through a romance, I think my SO's a bit weirded out. I love the clearly planned follow-through you have with your plot elements, such as Iruka's claim that he could land a punch on Kakashi.
I have two criticisms:
The first is the in-setting assertion that males don't need to do seduction missions. That seems unlikely... though I'll allow that with Kishimoto's writing, I wouldn't be surprised.
The second is that you have a moderate number of typos that could probably be resolved with a beta reader. They appear to come from skipping letters (which probably results in Word autocorrecting to the wrong thing) and the occasional homophone misuse. For example, you consistently use "weary" rather than "wary".
Other than that, I absolutely loved this to bits. Specifically, your perspective voices are distinct and convincing, your interactions are amusing and engaging, and your story-flow is great for slice-of-life/romantic comedy. I loved the gradual reveal that Gai was being passive-aggressive in his response to Ino.
I should probably stop wall-of-texting you, and just get to the part where I hope you find an interest in continuing this at some point. Favorited and followed with that in mind.
| Guest chapter 38 . 1/27
please, please, PLEASE update its been forever; like legitimately forever! It always made me happy to see the update alerts for your story. I know im not the only one and this story was just too good. Hope you haven't abandoned it!
| curlyfreak chapter 38 . 1/19
This story is so awesome! It honestly had me laughing and doing so many double takes! I wish you would update it and finish it, because its been such a fun read. Please update!
| CrystalBud chapter 11 . 1/11
| CrystalBud chapter 10 . 1/11
lol, this is hilarious
| Guest chapter 38 . 1/3
Hoping against hope that you haven't abandoned this!
| Sula 74 chapter 38 . 1/1
I made a New Year's Eve wish for this story. I won't tell you exactly what it was, because then it won't come true, but I made it and I have every faith that it will come true. ;)
| Scoobygirl45 chapter 38 . 12/29/2013
Cant wait for the update! Love this story so far!
| Sandataba chapter 38 . 12/26/2013
No, I didn't just call you a S.O.B., that would be rude. That was a heart-breaking, angst-ridden, woebegone sound of utter misery, wrenched from the depths of my dubiously existent soul. For the updates are un-forthcoming, and there is only a vast desolation to be felt as the year ends without a new chapter at all.
You will be happy to find, though, that if you use the filter function of ffnet to sort fics according to the most number of 'favorites' with Tenten as main character, DOM comes out on the very first page. Congratulations! A true achievement, and I think a positive one in your quest for feminine empowerment. Oh, and Merry Christmas. And now, I return to my gloom and despair, brooding on the inescapable reality that sometimes, stories are unfinished. Writers move on. Real life becomes pressing, and readers left forlorn. Goodbye, oh author, had we but a little more time together (Neji crashes in from the afterlife and jyukens the crap out of this reviewer). Okay, I'll stop. Forgot I had a fic that's been lying around unfinished too. Better chop-chop. Have a great new year too!
| Yaoi Hands chapter 38 . 12/17/2013
I don't usually review stories but this one is an exception. You know I remember reading this story just this summer break. I usually stayed up until like 6am just to read some really good stories and I remember sitting on my big couch in my living room, looking up at the stars and reading this story on my IPad. I took me from 12am - 7am with no breaks to read this. You wanna know what I said after I got done reading it?
BEST FUGDIN' STORY EVER!
First of all what got me glued in is the title. Dirty Old Men? It sounded so funny and I couldn't help but laugh at it. Next it was the couples, Tenten X Kakashi and Hinata X Genma? I was like, that's some really crack couples you got goin' on there! Then I read the summary and I was like what the hell, let me give this story a shot! You made the couples come together beautifully and there wasn't one chapter that I didn't enjoy! This story is funny, cute, barely any mistakes or typos, and you've kept everyone in character. It's really hard to make a crack story like this come together so well, but I have to say, you did the job beautifully.
I hope you return someday because I wish to read more of this awesome story! And I've read some of your other stories too. Your a fantastic writer girl, keep up the good work! Wow that was a long review...
Toki Out O3O
| ahhh so good chapter 38 . 12/11/2013
This fic is utterly amazing! I read the first chapter on a whim, and realized it was THE BEST THING EVER. Everything just seems so IC which was a bit surprising, since the pairings are so...not canon. But you have seriously just made kakaten my new fetish. If you ever have the time again, I hope you get around to updating. I would love to see the next chapter!
Keep up the great work!
| JacksonKid3 chapter 38 . 11/30/2013
Oh my gosh I UH-DORE this fic with a freakin passion Dude! The concept is awesome, the way you've written your characters is so believable and real, and it all just works so well together, and this story is just so good. Seriously, everything about it rocks.
Please update T.T
| UNCPanda chapter 38 . 11/29/2013
I need more
| We Will Be Victorious chapter 38 . 11/29/2013
Your story is the kind you can read over and over again. The kind of story you remember while putting the dishes away and start laughing at remembering particular scenes. I hope one day you'll eventually finish this story. I've read this story like five times now. :)