|Reviews for Fragments of the Forgotten|
| TheBeanButCallMeBee chapter 16 . 7/25/2012
| Mukuro234 chapter 16 . 4/27/2012
Awe that was so great the laven and other pairings were so cute as well.
| kh07gl chapter 16 . 3/18/2012
I love this fic! It's so awesome that I wanna steal it (can i? Jk ;)) the way it's written is splendid! Defiantly one of my faves!
| flygon3300 chapter 16 . 2/22/2012
I LOVE THE WHOLE STORY XD
ESPECIALLY THE HAPPY ENDING :D
| Etomacity chapter 16 . 2/9/2012
Wow, I am super glad I found this. I read it all in one sitting because I just couldn't stop. I enjoyed it to the very end. You are such a good writer and that was a very interesting plot.
I actually thought it would end up a tragedy. And that the body Lavi and Allen found, I thought it was Miranda or possibly Krory. But I'm glad it was none of those things. I like your ending a lot, although as a selfish reader, I wished it could have lasted a bit longer.
I spotted a few grammar errors here and there, nothing too bad that would subtract from the story.
I also felt a spark of inspiration reading this story. Can't explain it, but is just like after a person is done watching a good good movie or something. Although I got to say, your story got a bit cheesy. But I liked that type of cheesiness. Good job.
And so I thank you for writing this fanfiction, finishing it, and posting it here on . I hope you keep on writing more in the future, whatever fandom it might be for. Good luck to you!
| Mid-Night-Sun273 chapter 16 . 1/1/2012
I don't have Any other words to describe how much I like your story. It was really cute and nicely written. Good job, awesome story. Very interesting, I didnt want to stop reading.
| TheRandomGirl chapter 16 . 9/6/2011
This story was completed over a year ago, but I've only come across it now, and I'm surely glad I did, because this is one of the Lavi-Allen fics I really love.
I think this was a great story, and I loved how you made the story seem easy to understand despite all the past-present stuffs, and everything was simple - in a good way.
I especially loved how you wrote in other couples other than the main one, cross' concern for Allen(somewhat), and most of all Lulubell. I would say I don't like her much in the anime, but in your story she's just nice.
So, good story! And thanks for writing it!
| Lanslet chapter 16 . 6/28/2011
Wow, just WOW. This is great. I absolutely love this!
Great ending too
| moshimellow chapter 16 . 1/24/2011
I loved this, as I love all -future/reincarnatedDGM- fics.
This was a particularly good example of one.
An enjoyable read
| Suezanne chapter 16 . 11/3/2010
wow that is some ending I liked it
| bakaxusagi chapter 16 . 10/2/2010
That was an awesome story. I really liked the idea and how you were able to end it so nicely.. And I love the pairing of course 3
Thank you so much for the chance to spend my time reading this masterpiece of yours :)
| Angel Fantasy chapter 16 . 3/1/2010
I loved this story. It's a very good one.
| TheSeventhLie chapter 16 . 1/22/2010
wow, that was really nicely written, I really liked it. ;)
You've got a nice imagination. :D
| Char-sensei chapter 1 . 1/21/2010
This story seems pretty good, but I don't think "figment" means what you think it means. I think the word you were thinking of might be "fragment."
dictionary. reference browse/figment
figment- Something invented, made up, or fabricated: just a figment of the imagination.
I've only started the fic, but unless all of his memories are fake, it is not an accurate use of the word. It's an easy mistake to make ;; I didn't even notice it right away, and had to look it up to make sure first as well.
| Sitanya chapter 16 . 1/9/2010
Just enough cheesy !
And not too angsty ;)
And a cool enough ending... well
In the end, I would say that you're story is pretty cool ! :)