Reviews for Custos
Anon chapter 2 . 4/18/2009
Interesting story! Thanks for writing and sharing it.

The interactions between Obi-wan and Anakin were very well written and believable. Well done.
Karol Wolfe chapter 2 . 4/18/2009
So far so good. I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with it.
badkidoh chapter 2 . 4/18/2009
this is great so far, update soon
Allyanna chapter 2 . 4/18/2009
Very good! I'm happy that you decided to write a bit more! I really liked it!
Vader's Fallen Angel chapter 2 . 4/18/2009
Short, but excellent. I look forward to the sequel.
Beth chapter 1 . 4/16/2009
Oh yes, this is good! I can't wait for the second part. Update as soon as you can!
Melissa45 chapter 1 . 4/13/2009
Interesting premise. Looking forward to more!
Elenothar chapter 1 . 4/13/2009
Great start! This story really seems to be interesting.

Please continue it soon (I will review, I promise ;)
Osprey Eamon chapter 1 . 4/13/2009
I really like the concept for this story and can’t wait to read the rest of it. Totally agree with you that Obi-Wan would be a bit messed up by everything that’s happened.

I do think that your style of writing could be a bit more... detailed? Generally wordier I guess, more descriptive blah blah blah if you were looking for constructive criticism or something but that’s the only way I can fault it. I am completely in love with this fic right now.
Tovah98 chapter 1 . 4/12/2009
Please, please continue! I love it. :D
Flipside82 chapter 1 . 4/12/2009
I love this! I have already read this first chapter 3 times. Please continue this. So many writers just give up after 1 or 2 chapters to their stories. So please update soon.
sodorland chapter 1 . 4/12/2009
This story is promising. This was possibly the first time anyone had ever explored ROTS from the angle that Obi refused to destroy "his brother". Looking forward to more.
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