|Reviews for Rotten|
| Soulfightersu chapter 1 . 8/22/2009
Wow, very good.
I would never have compared them to Eve and the serpent until I read this.
And I really like the way you've actually made Sebastien seem a little tiny bit like Eve, but still the serpent.
If that makes any sense at all ;
| Kyuubi1794 chapter 1 . 8/22/2009
I really like this fic it's very AWESOME XD
I'd love to read more of your work
| Katsheswims chapter 1 . 8/18/2009
| yochan chapter 1 . 8/10/2009
UNHOLY SHIT 0_0
damn that is wiketly dirty x3
| Nostalgiosis chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
Beautiful. Just...beautiful. The symbolism in this one is staggering. I couldn't help but go and look up things about Eve and the serpent on Wiki just because of this story. This one must be one of my personal favorites out of your writings.
| nopenopnope chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
your imagery always blows me away, no matter what it is you're writing, but in this one especially it reached out and smacked me around (lovingly, I'm sure...) quite wonderfully. The idea of Sebastian as the serpent was just so perfect...and Ciel being the abnormal Eve who would be defiant...and just the conflicting dynamic...m, it was so very well done.
| DMFAZINA chapter 1 . 6/30/2009
*bangs her head on a desk* OMG that was freaking AWESOME! AH!. okay. sorry LOL. wow, this was really good. so beautifully descriptive and just mindblowing. i loved it.
| senshixdoukeshi chapter 1 . 6/8/2009
This story is beautifully, wonderfully written. I have to admit that I've been slugging through the submissions for kuroshitsuji and have been very disappointed with nearly all of them. Sebastian always seems to find some shred of humanity tucked away, never mind the fact that he's a demon!
I so enjoy your writing, deliciously descriptive and captivating. I think I espeically like this because of how evil it is at the core. Their's is not a happy relationship, it's not a promise, it's a contract and at the end up the day Ciel is nothing more than a meal to Sebastian and I'm so glad that you embrace his demonic nature.
| lustbader064 chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
Just like all you do... is amazing.
| VampireYumi chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
Omg... That was so awesome *_*
I love your style of writing, and the story!
| MistressNerd chapter 1 . 4/30/2009
Oh Sebastian that was mean...maybe...Oh what the hell Ciel wanted it XP
I had to read this twice because the first time I got a little confusing. haha I think I am just dumb Sebastian really is selfish -_-;
| sesshomarousecretlove chapter 1 . 4/29/2009
Wow, so amazing! I don't really have anything to critique, I just wanted to review for the sake of fangirling over it. XD
| Anon chapter 1 . 4/21/2009
I is loves you so much? *_*
*returns to normal*
I loved the concept of this story. And the realistic-ness of it. And, well, just about everything.
Write more pretty please? I gives you apple if you do. XD
| inmemoryoftheMasterRapper chapter 1 . 4/20/2009
Oh, yes XD
The forbidden fuit is the beautiful sin, it's the sweetest fruit that no one can ever deny.
| mochiusagi chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
wait did sebastion rape ciel?