|Reviews for Killing me softly|
| Blairx6661 chapter 17 . 10/27/2013
I've quite enjoyed this and wish there was more for me to read :) However there are a few things that need fixing. I would highly recommend you remember to use the line break function, and also, the way you constantly switch POVs every other paragraph just shows a scary lack of clarity and consistency.
| Happy-Valley chapter 17 . 2/28/2013
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
I really really really want to know what is going to happen next!
| liz-04 chapter 17 . 11/19/2012
See that always happens to me. I'll find a really great story that I like only to find out it hasn't been updated in a long time. You have to update soon ok. I mean they haven't even kissed yet!
| The Yoshinator chapter 17 . 9/29/2012
This is pretty cool. Please continue.
| Juicy Pear chapter 17 . 9/17/2012
You've been writing this story since before u met me? Write faster :P hahaha
| Crystal-Wolf-Guardain-967 chapter 17 . 5/28/2012
i loved it! can't wait for more!
| Hope and love chapter 17 . 5/27/2012
love it! update soon!
| Pfachgirl chapter 7 . 5/27/2012
Cute story :) I think you're getting Carlisle's character down pretty well.
It's sometimes a bit confusing to know who's POV you're writing in, but otherwise well done! Please make the chapters a bit longer though ;)
| Isa chapter 7 . 5/27/2012
A very sweet story, I must say. I love stories with Carlisle/OC and I think you are getting his character retty well! :)
Perhaps you should get a Beta or someone to check the grammar a bit? Otherwise really good and I'm waiting for the next chapter :)
| Rainbow Haired Girl chapter 16 . 4/28/2012
When are you going to update? Love this story so far please update.
| A.K.Riddle and Company chapter 16 . 7/22/2011
Awesome! I love it! Keep it going!
| Hope and love chapter 16 . 6/20/2011
i love it! Update soon!
| minnie015 chapter 15 . 1/24/2011
YAY! up date soon. The stories are going all so beautifully.
| Dark Angel 792 chapter 15 . 12/29/2010
I love this story soo much! Please update soon )
| Trunksymia chapter 15 . 10/17/2010