Reviews for Over the Hill
MsKarissaM chapter 1 . 4/29/2011
It funny cause I was just thinking about doing a threesome with Leah and Nessie also. But I see you beat me to the punch. I love it.
the Vampire of Gorillaz chapter 1 . 4/18/2011
hhahaha i like the 'we didnt want a pack scandal with her having my puppies' :) lol
Dimkas-Roza8 chapter 1 . 1/9/2011
That was actually really good I'm not trying to sound surprised I just usually don't like twilight stories
mariah22 chapter 1 . 9/11/2010
i about had an orgasm (:
mschris44 chapter 1 . 8/20/2010
WOW! That was good.
julz12 chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
this was an interesting chapter but to me it just felt like you were writing straight porn.
AddiictedVampiireFan chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
That was awesome lol you should write more stuff like that aye could you continue this story a bit or was that it?
Profile Has been Deleted chapter 1 . 6/17/2010
Nice ;P
GabbiiODwyerIrishTreasure chapter 1 . 6/10/2010
Awesome! Super hot
Shadow Kissed Aphrodite chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
m so hot! wetness totally lol and yea the coming thing is soo true
WritingAmant chapter 1 . 1/31/2010
With the "coming" thing... I know! Even in New Moon I felt like such a pervert when Bella says, "I'm coming!" and Edward's reply: "Bella, I don't want you, to come." I was like orgy! But my mind is always there. Anyway, nice story.
GirlofTheFlowers chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
well done ! lemons are usally badly written but i liked this one ... with the whole to come thing - my best friend's last name is cummins - also I do the same thing - I'll yell out I'm coming and then realise what i've just said ... anways good story - do you plan to contuie it ? you could do jacob present to nessie or something...
Popcornzoe chapter 1 . 9/25/2009
Yeah, I think of "to come" in the same way too! The other day, my maid was telling my brother to go help her with something, and she was like "come here!" My brother and I just burst out laughing because it sounded so wrong...
iROCKskinnieez chapter 1 . 9/3/2009
twilightmom67 chapter 1 . 6/29/2009
Yeah, I always imagined Nessie being a kinky one...I guess having such a prude for a father, I just think it's funny. I always imagine her being bisexual, with many partners, etc.
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