Reviews for Breathing Underwater
brodie-wan chapter 1 . 4/16/2009
Wow. That was thick. Like being Dana is somehow and underwater existence. Sad.

she never takes, and doesn’t give.

a statue of notability

so sturdy and sure.

he doesn’t understand

how she doesn’t feel the need to want

something,

anything,

but tonight it’s different.

That sounds like Dana. All shell with little heart. A know that's not completely true, but I can see how it could be perceived; even by Fox.
CatTheRipper chapter 1 . 4/13/2009
very good! i liked the ending because its true!
Queequeg1224 chapter 1 . 4/13/2009
That was really beautiful :)