Reviews for I will not say I am in love
TheReapersDaughter chapter 7 . 3/22
great story please continue
Blue Sock Monkey chapter 7 . 1/26/2013
Freya01 chapter 7 . 7/10/2011
That was an interesting read, refreshing from the usual sebastianxciel stories

considering English is not your first language you have done a pretty good job :D i look forward to the next chapter
cookies111 chapter 7 . 3/13/2011
Gah! Please update! Or I might end up like that crazy guy. O.o. Anyway love the story and more please
Yukinlee chapter 7 . 8/3/2010
I was so excited to find out that you had stopped the story for so long... T_T..

I really really interest & love your story, would you please continue write this fic? I'm anticipate to read your newest chapter...

afallenheart chapter 7 . 6/24/2010
Please update as soon as possible! PLEASE!
Aurora Hargreaves chapter 7 . 3/13/2010
I LOVED this chapter! I can't wait to read what happens next.
xXxSapphireJewelxXx chapter 7 . 2/9/2010
This story is so good! Please continue it!
YaoiFanGirL18 chapter 7 . 11/2/2009
LOve this story! haha3x! i Like Grell's character here! hope you can update the next chapter soon! please! i'm waiting for the next chapter! :)
bookenworum chapter 7 . 8/29/2009
Hmm. Can I give you some advice?

I liked it, but there were a few things that stopped me from enjoying it fully..

Would you mind if I told you what they were?

Well, first thing is: your first language isn't English. You're obviously able to communicate well in it, but you have some grammatical errors you might want to look at: you confuse some words and sometimes forget 'a' en 'an' where they are needed.

Sometimes you confuse prepositions as well (like: for, to; etc)

My first language isn't English either, so I understand where you're coming from. :)

I say, get a beta to catch your mistakes!


The second thing: You use some Japanese in here. I'd normally look that over, but this is out of character for them.

Kuroshitsuji is a manga, written by someone who is Japanese, sure; but Ciel, Elizabeth and Sebastian aren't Japanese and probably don't know any Japanese words either,(Like Kawaii) since they live in England.


The third thing: I don't for the life of me get why Grell is there, and why Ciel hasn't ordered Sebastian to throw him the hell out of his house. xD

..They're a bit out of character; I also thought that homosexuality wasn't that accepted in the 19th century, but Elizabeth reacted like a typical yaoi fangirl..

(though she does have a very soft spot for cute things, yes.. xD)

Though I enjoyed the romance in this, and you thought out the plot very well. I'm sure you worked hard, seeing the amount of chapters and words, but it could be improved.

I hoped that helped you. :)

Off Topic: And you're attention is going towards UlquiorraxGrimmjow? I love that pairing too. :D

Kalana Fox chapter 7 . 7/31/2009
Aw, how cute!

The only thing that bothered me with this story, though, was the horribly high amount of grammatical and spelling errors. I strongly suggest you read through your chapters or run spell check on them before submitting them. It was a bit annoying having to mentally correct sentences in order to keep reading.

Please continue though! I sense a lemon...hehehehe.
tkunumitsu chapter 7 . 7/24/2009
i really luv ur story, cant wait for the next chapter
Johnlock is My Division chapter 7 . 7/21/2009
woot i like this story but grell is uber annoying xD there are some grammatical errors, btd..just sayin
HaeneEmzette chapter 7 . 7/10/2009
awesome story. can't wait to see what will happen if or when the candyman will actually get a hold of ciel. what would seb's reaction be i wonder...?
RebeccasanFujiEijiLVR chapter 7 . 7/7/2009
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