Reviews for American Girl
xxcaityxx chapter 10 . 4/18/2009
edward has a girlfriend edward has a girlfriend.

i love alice. put a bit more of her into it in future please :)
Cherryflavorpez chapter 10 . 4/18/2009
I love love love this story! I have always wanted to backpack through Europe! And now I can at least read about it. :) Update as soon as you can. :)
mokanimom chapter 10 . 4/18/2009
I just found this story and have totally ignored my kids to read all of it. I love it! It is great! I can't wait for more. You must be good at research or BS because I would believe that you have backpacked through Europe. Your details are amazing.
anothertwilighter chapter 10 . 4/18/2009
I'm surprised Bella hadn't have sex yet. Is she really falling for Edward? I'm not convinced yet. She seems to be bitchy sometimes toward Edward.

I can tell you for sure, they both won't get to see lederhosen in Berlin. My hubby is born and raised in Berlin and I never got to see lederhosen in Berlin. You'll see them in Munich and some parts in Austria and Switzerland.

In Berlin they could go to the Zoo called Tiergarten or to the Kurf├╝rstendamm (a very famous street to shop).

Or send them to Switzerland, I'll show them some good stuff here! ;-) LOL!
NZTwilighter chapter 10 . 4/18/2009
Looking forward to more...soon? I really like that Bella is still essentially the Bella we all know without the insecurity and jealousy that I sometimes get sick of. Also, Edward isn't extreme playboy or extreme softie that is a bit 'played' at times. And I am not missing Lauren/Jessica/Tanya drama! I like that they're both just enjoying their natural chemistry and not becoming emotional wrecks, though I imagine they will at the end of the trip! Bella needs to man up to the truth of her college choice!
oceanluvr chapter 3 . 4/17/2009
This story is so great.

Backpacking through Europe with a gorgeous man... yum.
puasluoma chapter 10 . 4/17/2009
lol "I'm yours" was playing while I red this chapter!
grtchn chapter 10 . 4/17/2009
I have an idea for you. I know they won't get to Paris for a while, so store this away for the future.

I thought that it would be cute if (I'm assuming they be srs and expressed their love...numerous times) Edward tells Bella he is booking them a room at a hostel in PAris but REALLY books them a huge suite at the Ritz Hotel. I mean it's PARIS! You can't have them stay in a hostel in Paris. Come on.

oh, and if you would wanna...I thought maybe when they go to Italy they should spend a weekend in the Tuscan countryside in a tiny cottage a la "Under the Tuscan Sun" or something. Even though that wasn't a tiny cottage in the movie...still.
amigirl chapter 10 . 4/17/2009
Thanks for the chapter. I thought I was going to go the whole weekend without one.
TLammy chapter 10 . 4/17/2009
Please have Bella own up to Columbia soon, I would like to see her be as honest with Edward as he just was with her (about the girls). Good chapter.
ile.forever chapter 10 . 4/17/2009
I love this story!
lovebuggkiss chapter 10 . 4/17/2009
Amazing chapter. :)

I love that he insists she's his girlfriend; i mean, forget asking. :)

Can't wait for more. Your story is pretty great.

Berlin', i had to plan an 'imaginary' trip there for my german2 class in highschool once. Hope to read more soon. Thanks for the update.
Seren1ty47 chapter 10 . 4/17/2009
Oh yay an update before I go on holiday, your the best! It's really cute that he told her about his man whorish ways, makes wanting to be Bella's boyfirend so much even better. I'm glad he's opening up to her. I still love alice her emails always make me chuckle ;-) Looking forawrd to a 'American Girl' marathon when i return! Thanks so much for the update! Can't wait for more x
bacmel79 chapter 10 . 4/17/2009
You've spoiled me with your many updates.

Love the story can't wait for the rest!
lysvia chapter 10 . 4/17/2009
HAHAHA! So... I just came to the conclusion that I may be Angela at this one! Living through your stories... it's just that THIS Edward has me drooling LOL!

Anyway, you could had taken them to Ikea, I would had gone... it doesn't sound so akward. Besides it would be funny just to imagine Edward's face when Bella says where she wants to go! Maybe some groping at the bathroom section... LOL!

Sorry... I saw myself in there.

See ya!
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