Reviews for Hidden Within
Aligator chapter 4 . 9/9/2014
Update
Jack-Frost-300-TrueFrost chapter 1 . 8/6/2014
love the story i like it a lot
infernostrider chapter 4 . 7/13/2014
Please continue this amazing story its really good
Guest chapter 4 . 6/24/2014
I love it please more dont finish like this
Melancholy's Sunshine chapter 4 . 5/7/2014
Please update soon. This looks like it is going to be very entertaining.
Randomdude chapter 4 . 3/19/2014
Please continue this, and the other stories that you started.
Have you noticed that you have three stories right next to each other with only 1 chapter and about 600 words each? Why don't you continue them a bit more? This one's doing fine, just keep adding chapters and if you run out of ideas or want to bounce off of somebody then you can always just ask for it in reviews.
veterianarian chapter 4 . 3/17/2014
Update update update please update
Slightly Disturbed Cookie Girl chapter 4 . 2/22/2014
Have a cookie for your troubles.
PCheshire chapter 4 . 2/22/2014
do you mind giving him the ability to form him webs into little spiders that he can control? and being able to trap an entire mall in a web in seconds? and be able to choose if he wants to be visible or invisible if he is in those webs
hehe got the idea from Brood Mother from Warcraft/DotA
KeyTyper chapter 4 . 12/29/2013
i really like this so far. i like the stories where Peter lives on the streets and is taken in by the Avengers or X men. please update soon!
redQween chapter 5 . 8/29/2013
hey, i would love to hear to hear more about this story.. but i do not really like the idea of giving my email adress sorry ..
Warriorsqueen chapter 5 . 8/28/2013
This sopa thing this time actually has nothing to do with text copyright, only things like YouTube videos.
Italia19 chapter 4 . 5/28/2013
please continue! i love this idea and you wrote it really well with no beta to edit it.
funimate chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
good good good keep writing
Johnny5 chapter 4 . 1/15/2013
Great stuff hope to read some more chapter soon.
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