|Reviews for Hidden Within|
| Antony101 chapter 4 . 10/16/2016
I love this story its one of my favorites, i really enjoyed reading it and hope u continue on with this story, please update soon.
| LittelLuisa chapter 4 . 3/27/2016
This is a really good story. Please countine this story!
| K chapter 4 . 3/3/2016
| Guest chapter 4 . 1/23/2016
UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
| ImaKaraTabiHe chapter 4 . 1/1/2016
Oohhh it's been so long but this is so good.. I hope there's still an update in the future. I can hope, right?
| Incarnate47 chapter 4 . 12/31/2015
are you still going to continue the story? please i want see more its really good
| T'Challa2002 chapter 4 . 12/15/2015
Can't wait for the rest I really liked it
| kidamerica123 chapter 4 . 9/12/2015
great story please update
| GhostLucy chapter 4 . 4/1/2015
Please update soon
| Aligator chapter 4 . 9/9/2014
| JackFrost-300-TrueFrost chapter 1 . 8/6/2014
love the story i like it a lot
| infernostrider chapter 4 . 7/13/2014
Please continue this amazing story its really good
| Guest chapter 4 . 6/24/2014
I love it please more dont finish like this
| Melancholy's Sunshine chapter 4 . 5/7/2014
Please update soon. This looks like it is going to be very entertaining.
| Randomdude chapter 4 . 3/19/2014
Please continue this, and the other stories that you started.
Have you noticed that you have three stories right next to each other with only 1 chapter and about 600 words each? Why don't you continue them a bit more? This one's doing fine, just keep adding chapters and if you run out of ideas or want to bounce off of somebody then you can always just ask for it in reviews.