Reviews for In Our World
FreakyMuthee chapter 1 . 6/2
honestly, i already predicted the plot twist when he called kakashi with a different name. but damn... this is amazing
Rie chapter 1 . 2/15/2016
That was really good. I couldn't stop reading, it was very inspirational, and it was a great read.
berry5tz chapter 1 . 9/3/2015
Whoa...that was deep. It was also sad. Sakumo had been losing his mind when his wife died. It makes me angry. when a parent can't move on for the sake of the child that they made together. They really thing that their spouse would be happy that they had given up on their child?I really felt bad for Kakashi. The reality had to hurt worse then the actual abuse.

This was written well.
Boneheart chapter 1 . 5/4/2015
That was dark and beautiful all at once great job!
Project MJOLNIR chapter 1 . 11/21/2014
Your story is very heart wrenching yet I could not stop reading I like the ending the detail about his name had me stunned great story!
tineyninja chapter 1 . 10/5/2014
This was so sad! But very well written
Lidsworth chapter 1 . 3/26/2013
This was really good, I loved it :D
Mr Stereo1 chapter 1 . 5/8/2012
Well... this is the first case I've seen where Sakumo's suicide makes sense from a western perspective. And poor, poor, Kakashi. He'll be even more messed up than in canon.
Tokiyoshi chapter 1 . 12/28/2011
Woah! Dark and fantastic!

Havn't read a good one shot in a very long time!

Keep writing! :)
PWTMC chapter 1 . 6/21/2011
First Sakumo/Kakashi fic I've ever read.

It was good. Little plot twist at the end was EPIC.

I've never read a story like that before.

Great idea!
CarefreeSummer chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
Oh my God! PLOT TWIST! That ending was intense! I was totally into it.

Epic read!
osono chapter 1 . 9/26/2010
Now that's the type of fanfiction I like to read! Hat off for you my lady~
Renchikolul chapter 1 . 9/24/2010
Wow thats sick and very sad that all this time he thought of Kakashi as his lost wife not son.
UchidaKarasu chapter 1 . 12/8/2009

Fantastic writing and a captivating plot! And while there was the few and occasional sentence that had problems, the overall piece was so fabulous that you didn't even notice it! Wonderful job!

Ja ne!

Arashi-Kumo chapter 1 . 4/17/2009
This was very good and very sad. TT_TT *sniff*
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