Reviews for Disbound season two
Paosheep chapter 9 . 4/1/2007
Wow. I'm like, the first review in over a year and a half...

Anyway, I love the story. So far, it's great. Good job!
Arrow chapter 1 . 11/12/2004
Dear, lord. I do believe that I didn't know this chapter was up! *gasp, shock, horror* I came across it as I re-read all of Dbd -again- and now it is 1.28AM and I am pouting, not from lack of sleep, but from the fact that I won't get to read the next chapter.

So I leave you with this.

deleted9306 chapter 9 . 10/6/2004
Riny, this chap was awesome! Really, the whole story is, but this chapter has me sitting on the edge of my computer chair. I hope you update soon. I wanna kill Gary for dumping Mia. GAH!

mitch chapter 9 . 8/31/2004
well hello!good good stuff,oh how i have missed it!looking 4ward 2 the next chapter!hope ur doing ok neway and drop me a line sometime!loads of love n glomps,michelle x
Sarah the nerd chapter 9 . 8/5/2004
*hurries in* I'm alivee...

And I want to say 'good chapter'. ;)

*says it, for it is true*
Trish chapter 9 . 8/1/2004
It's been quite some time since I read this! But fantastic as usual. Hmm...being an asthmatic, not being able to breathe is my worst nightmare! Hey Drake don't knock my concerns - after all there's been so many date rapes with spiked drinks happening. Sexual tension between Mia and Gary, I suppose they're old enough, just as long as she doesn't get knocked up otherwise I'll have Gary for dinner!

I might have to reread some of this because I'm confused as to how Tony knows our titles. And needles, ew. MORE! I would update with MN but at the moment I'm just sitting on number 15.
Alan Wilkinson chapter 8 . 10/12/2003
Oh dear.

Good chapter.
Mia chapter 8 . 10/11/2003
Damn this hospital-bed-hair! But still – he was fit, she was fit… and fit people owe it to genetics to stick together…

*laughs so hard rib cracks* ouch. gyrating *reverberates with laughter*

Michelle... oh that is such a thing she would do. *sighs* Dammit! I knew Trish was going to pick me!

Ek! Stupid evil boys! Gawd, I hate throwing up. Of course who does, but I do it violently. Great chap, hon, I'll just sit at the computer till the next one comes out. *attentspan runs out after four minutes* Whoo new record.
Trish chapter 8 . 10/11/2003
See good things can come out of outrageous stunts..even though I would never do something like that in real life(I'm sure I'd die first!) Yay! Michelle has got her Travis...and Drake has a very interesting outfit completely out of place in the tropics. I must admit the ending has me a little confused. Is Mia going to nearly die again? I thought I was supposed to be the poisoned one - or does everyone get to have two close shaves? MORE please! Oh and you are getting a solo in the second part of Dancing Queen and I think I know how to bring you and your 'hubby' back in MN.
Hawaiian Potagee chapter 1 . 10/11/2003
Havent even read the story yet( gonna read the first one first), but as soon as saw My Will, InuYasha, i fell with this story. IT IS LIKE MY FREAKING MOST FAVORITE SONG, I HAVE IT ON RIGHT NOW UNDER MEDIA PLAYER REPEATING ITSELF OVER AND OVER LIKE I DO EVERY DAY (ahem). Well look for another post by me for this fic, i KNOW its gonna be good.
hf chapter 7 . 8/29/2003
wo im alive!wo!and awake too!even better!i would get down with my bad self, but im in a hospital bed with a hole in me that wasnt there before!:)
Alan Wilkinson chapter 7 . 7/31/2003
Well, if the shop was there...

I look forward to seeing what Drake does about that. Wonder if he'll battle Ash again. This IS Pokemon after all; We're long past time for a Pokemon battle...
Arrow chapter 7 . 7/27/2003
*bwahahaa* Your package is completely done and I will be sending it off tommorow! Oh, I needed a Dbd chapter today (had to go back to school clothes shopping). OOh naughty Todd and Rachel, i thought it was Fish bait at first and I was slightly grossed out, thankfully it wasn't. I don't know why I thought that, why would Todd go back on a boat. *shakes head* anyway.

She sighed again as she buttered her napkin. XD LOL! I could see her doing that. Poor Gary, but he's rich and hanging out with a bunch of girls he should never expect to have any money left.

:O TRISH! That's not something you should buy for a book signing!

Mia was bored. No, not just bored, she was bored. *makes quote for MSN* God my mom cleans for the cleaning lady at the hotels too. It *bothers* me!

God, Trish I disown you forever. Well I would if I could stop laughing! XD Oh I love you Rina! Yay next chapter coming up! This was fabulous Rina, I loved it to death! And shall await more. *sits and waits*
Nic Watson chapter 1 . 7/27/2003
Bloody nerds. Get out and ride.
Koriku chapter 7 . 7/27/2003
WOW! This chapter was... Um... *coughs* Er, exciting? oo;


Thanks for moving up that part with Lillith :) Though I still can't tell how she's involved in the plot... Guess I'll have to wait and see! Hey wait... *goes back and reads a line of the chapter* 'Isn't a custom in that world'? Does that mean it IS a custom in OUR world! OO; Okay, I'm scared...

*cough* Anyways, thanks for the update, and please give another one soon D

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