I just read that you dont want to make naruto "too strong" even with all this potential. It is even more frustrating when a character is given all this extra training and is just as useless as the were in canon. I haven't seen how you are going to handle this yet, but nothing annoys me more than a character who SHOULD be better than they were, being shoehorned into the same ruts as canon.

Ok so now everyone gunning for them
Kiri and Kumo to convince/recruit
Oto to strong arm
Taki to provide protection
Iwa and Root to kill

Actually no, there is still not a lick of sense in Shizune's act of stupidity in chapter 10, and the fact that she got away with justifying it to not just herself but Naruto is just silly.

I couldn't help but facepalm at Shizune crippling Naruto just ahead of mortal combat. When she just said he's supposed to move as quickly as possible. This is a thousand times MORE dangerous than him stumbling along after them! And 20 minutes? That's a LIFETIME in a Ninja battle. Holy shit author.

You were doing so well until now too...

Hahhaha this fanfic is so fucking dead hahhaha

Pls don't tell me Kurama is going to die.

That's a nice story you wrote! I hope you are alright and soon will return on continuing the tale.

your Escape from the Hokage's Hat story need epic art cover like any story would, kakashi seriously need getting himself back in shape by train himself to bone because i blame jiraiya pervert book to let him become weak

Naruto's twisted and retarded logic, she will be happy that they are happy, she now has to be happy that it is a sacrifice for the good of the Villa, because she will be happy that they are happy, they are her family and she has sacrifice yourself for your family which is the village but your real family can be sacrificed but not the other way around, that's why i hate stories of naruto with canon personality get this disgusting patriotism, fuck the villa fuck their happiness , it is still asked why Boruto hated Naruto, with that logic be happy son even as a sacrifice for the sake of the villa

So Naruto will still have that retarded philosophy of embracing all hate, giving his life for a lot of people who want him dead is very retarded, I thought he would be smarter without the seals, how long will he stay in this bullshit he can't even clean the butt right because he doesn't control enough chakra and to make matters worse the personality is the same as the canon one, my patience is already running out this delay for Naruto to improve, 13 chapters he is more useless than in canon.

It is very clear in the canon that Naruto's training and studies were sabotaged on purpose no one wanted a smart Naruto even the third hokage himself didn't want a smart Naruto, when Naruto steals the scroll of forbidden jutsus was in my view a test to test loyalty from Naruto to konoha, this shows that the third one was aware of the sabotage of Naruto's learning, so soon he doesn't want a smart Naruto, it's pretty clear that the third manipulated Naruto to chase this dream of being hokage, something I always thought strange is the lack of inheritance inherited by Naruto, I think it's impossible that Kushina came to konoha with only the clothes on her body, where's the Uzumaki heritage clan jutsus fuuinjutsu techniques and money the same about Minato where's your techniques your money, Naruto had to learn rasengan from Jiraia.

it took Sasuke almost killing her to change his mind, and it looked more like she was hurt than waking up to the reality of the things Sasuke had done not that Sasuke was wrong.
I think you made Sakura much more empathetic than in canon, I always thought she lacked a little empathy on her part with Naruto and with people around her, we even see Sasuke emotionally atrophied in the way it was to be much more empathetic with Naruto.
but even with Kakashi's lack of training Sakura never took her ninja career seriously, I thought it was more realistic for Sakura to be Shizune's apprentice but I think it should be someone with a lower profile than Shizune to train Sakura after all having good control of chakra or not from the reports she must have seen that Sakura doesn't take her work seriously and now with the team broken up I don't see any reason to give her special training from someone as important as Shizune, of course Canon thinks Tsunade only trained Sakura to increase the chances of keeping Naruto alive, it makes sense that Naruto is much better than the canon he is the son of two people with a lot of potential, Naruto should have been a master in fuuinjutsu, we see in the tree climbing training that Naruto had control of chakra almost equal to Sasuke's, considering that Sasuke had training and contact with chakra since he was very young, this shows that either Naruto has a genius level chakra control considering the how much chakra is Naruto managing or is Sasuke horrible at chakra control, seeing this chakra control from Naruto I think if he didn't have Kurama sealed in him he must have been a genius at chakra control, a and please Fassa a Naruto more OCC if he has a suppression in his memories he should have a personality change, after all the most ridiculous thing in the Naruto canon is this excess of kindness and lack of rancor and resentment, no one is that good it's not humanly possible and I say this as a son who had a mother with a horrible childhood, my mother suffered a lot in her childhood and even with the support of religion and her aunt she was still very neutral with the death of my grandfather.

One thing I always found strange was Naruto's lack of promotion in his career as a ninja he did many things since he was a child that are worth a promotion, he defeated Gaara thus saving the village from more destruction and death he helped save gaara's life, helped kill one of the Akatsuki members, defeated Nagato, saving the Villa from being completely erased from history and because of him several people were resurrected by all these things even before the fourth great war he was supposed to be jounin.

I agree with your opinion about Kakashi, he was a failure as a teacher and he failed deeply as an apprentice and friend of Minato, but for me Jiraia is not even close to being a good teacher and he is not even a good godfather, I still remember how horrified I was with him spending Naruto's money on prostitutes, about Sakura I understand why people hate her so much, with her being so aggressive towards Naruto and always putting him down along with the kind of life he has, a lot of people like to turning her into a monster, I think the false confession didn't help either and I don't think she ever thanked him for saving her life.

Now I don't understand why you have stopped writing
It was just so good