Reviews for Escape from the Hokage's Hat
Ibskib chapter 15 . 5/16/2016
poison s - poisons

the basics of Tsunade's strength technique? (I don't believe that even Shizune knows the technique, so it really makes no sense to attempt teaching it to Hinata)

the bodies - the body's
Ibskib chapter 14 . 5/16/2016

political ally's - political allies

his highnesses - His Highness'

one of subordinates - one of his subordinates
Ibskib chapter 13 . 5/15/2016
the rulers - the ruler's

Straitening - Straightening

flicker of lighting - flicker of lightning

could seriously effect - could seriously affect

Smiling at child antics - Smiling at the child's antics
Ibskib chapter 13 . 5/15/2016
Noticed the opposite gender problem here, where you used the 'male' form to describe Shizune

brunet - brunette (the former is for males, or if the gender is unspecified, the latter is for females)
Ibskib chapter 13 . 5/15/2016
I've noticed this popping up a whole bunch of times, it keeps making me think that Naruto has transformed into a female :-)

blonde - blond (without the 'e' when describing males)
Ibskib chapter 12 . 5/15/2016
Noticed two errors:

the demon brats place - the demon brat's place

blaitenly - blatantly
Boricuasbond chapter 40 . 4/15/2016
40 chapters and still Narutos party arent home yet. You are streghting this story way to much. Ive enjoyed most of the chapters but really, theres just to much time between chapters and no real progress in Narutos Jutsus or new Jutsus.
nightwind83 chapter 43 . 4/12/2016
shame that you lost the drive for the story
marquis.shax chapter 15 . 4/6/2016
shoulda had Sakura pull out her chakra enhanced punch an blast Kakashi in the balls with it for being such an arrogant lazy Uchiha obsessed asshole lol
Guest chapter 5 . 4/5/2016
The bashing ruins this story for me
7 chapter 26 . 3/12/2016
S da
The Fox Sage chapter 28 . 3/8/2016
dont you fucking dare start with that filler fish chick,im tired of this filler stuff
The Fox Sage chapter 27 . 3/8/2016
dont pull that naming thing being a mistake shit, hashirama and madara themselves do that snd they sre stronger then sll 5 kage combined
The Fox Sage chapter 27 . 3/8/2016
personally i agree with fukosaku,jiraiya should be the one training naruto not tsunade or shizune
The Fox Sage chapter 26 . 3/8/2016
once again can you not waste time with a story arc about yakumo, a character most dont even know exists let alone care about the fate of
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