Reviews for Escape from the Hokage's Hat
Guest chapter 43 . 5/24/2016
Too much fighting filler and not enough 'training' time. Sounds like they were on an adventure and trained only in their spare time. Didn't seem like Naruto learned any useful jutsus. Too bad this story couldn't go on. Because the way I saw it, it was going downhill after the part where Tsunade invoked her Hokage status and ordered people around. Too many nonsensical characters were created or added in, so it got annoying and old real fast.
hamsterville chapter 26 . 5/17/2016
A good story but way too many fillers
Ibskib chapter 16 . 5/16/2016
that Kurenai - than Kurenai

people said about blonde's - people said about blondes

and head butt - and a head butt

was clinging to her curves slightly - was clinging to her curves
(superfluous, made the sentence feel clumsy)

more careful what he said - more careful about what he said

Each time that she tracked the projectiles - Each time tracking the projectiles (felt clumsy)

After a treatment - With the treatment
(she has already been healed)

had the minimal amount of decency - had the decency

mustn t - must not

large bolder - large boulder

you right arm - your right arm
Ibskib chapter 15 . 5/16/2016
poison s - poisons

the basics of Tsunade's strength technique? (I don't believe that even Shizune knows the technique, so it really makes no sense to attempt teaching it to Hinata)

the bodies - the body's
Ibskib chapter 14 . 5/16/2016

political ally's - political allies

his highnesses - His Highness'

one of subordinates - one of his subordinates
Ibskib chapter 13 . 5/15/2016
the rulers - the ruler's

Straitening - Straightening

flicker of lighting - flicker of lightning

could seriously effect - could seriously affect

Smiling at child antics - Smiling at the child's antics
Ibskib chapter 13 . 5/15/2016
Noticed the opposite gender problem here, where you used the 'male' form to describe Shizune

brunet - brunette (the former is for males, or if the gender is unspecified, the latter is for females)
Ibskib chapter 13 . 5/15/2016
I've noticed this popping up a whole bunch of times, it keeps making me think that Naruto has transformed into a female :-)

blonde - blond (without the 'e' when describing males)
Ibskib chapter 12 . 5/15/2016
Noticed two errors:

the demon brats place - the demon brat's place

blaitenly - blatantly
Boricuasbond chapter 40 . 4/15/2016
40 chapters and still Narutos party arent home yet. You are streghting this story way to much. Ive enjoyed most of the chapters but really, theres just to much time between chapters and no real progress in Narutos Jutsus or new Jutsus.
nightwind83 chapter 43 . 4/12/2016
shame that you lost the drive for the story
marquis.shax chapter 15 . 4/6/2016
shoulda had Sakura pull out her chakra enhanced punch an blast Kakashi in the balls with it for being such an arrogant lazy Uchiha obsessed asshole lol
Guest chapter 5 . 4/5/2016
The bashing ruins this story for me
7 chapter 26 . 3/12/2016
S da
The Fox Sage chapter 28 . 3/8/2016
dont you fucking dare start with that filler fish chick,im tired of this filler stuff
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