Reviews for Under a Killing Moon |
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![]() ![]() I think I'm done. This is all over the place. Needs to be seriously edited. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Enjoying the tete a tete :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting twists! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really enjoying this! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this ending much better, though I wish it was longer. Interesting take on canon. Really liked this Bella. Really liked this Swan family, especially how they were more the focus than the vamps. Like everyone else, would love a sequel. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for sharing your story ! I am curious to learn more about Bella! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! Just read the some of the other reviews and found out I read the alternate, happy ending. Good - I hate character death. I like the story a lot - it was Twilight meets Vampire Academy meets Buffy. I wish they could have stayed at the Homecoming dance a little longer - Lauren's reaction would have been interesting. Honestly, I wish the confrontation with James had been given more time to let us in on his plans for Bella. And I wish when the Volturi arrived it had been told from EPOV - Bella was unconscious too soon, and we never really were told what happened there - just little bits and pieces. That could be fleshed out a lot. But overall, I enjoyed it. Thank you |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love that statement Jacob black that shape shifting son of a bitch and his vamp hating cronies best iv herd so far ,,,,,,, |
![]() ![]() ![]() DEFINITELY like this ending better. What was the point of EVERYTHING she was put through since the age of eight yrs. old if not to end up with Edward & helping take control of the supernatural world...which was the MAIN part of the prophecy. Makes sense to me. Thank you for sharing your story with me. Jamie Crabtree |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think this story is one of the strangest fanfic I've ever read. If it weren't for the recaps, I don't think I would have understood half of it. I'm still not sure if I have the plot right. |
![]() ![]() ![]() As much as I hate to admit it, I think you did the right thing by killing Bella off. I didn't like the alternate ending as much as the original but Ican understand why you put it up there. Thanks for sharing this story. It was a pleasure to read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the alternate ending much better. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this ending a lot more :) Great story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love these personalities, thank you for making them funny and sarcastic, it's great |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm sorry, but I honestly couldn't get back the first chapter. The prologue was interesting, but this Bella is particularly whiny and mean. There might be a reason for that later on in the story, but I hate being in the mind of a girl like this. I'm sorry. I'm sure you're a great author though. |