Reviews for Casual: Defined
themergitonian chapter 1 . 1/11/2014
Runecutter chapter 1 . 2/10/2013
It had a good vibe, but overall i think it's a bit crude and unrefined.
There seems to be some jumping in between the sentiments that a bit fleshing out and smoothing of the character traits might get out of the story and i can't help but feel that it drops of at the end a little too fast, what with Harry's "wooing"? ;) Has there been a success? Of course it's implied, but i'd like to see it black on white, the poor guy HAS spilled out all his feelings and she still is a bit haughty and evasive... not the ideal moment for stopping a story, i'd say!
eterna-romantica03 chapter 1 . 4/20/2009
Adding this to my favourites even though I have reviewed in are becoming one of my favourites authors.
liz22463 chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
aww! this is so cute! do you think you could continue it?
Till2NiteDoUsPart chapter 1 . 4/15/2009
This is very different. But in a good way. I liked it quite alot lol
AB chapter 1 . 4/13/2009
Oh, lawd. Good one-shot, though not really going anywhere or trying to. Just smut. But, I would suggest a warning to those unfortunate prudes who will duck and cover at the mention of smut.