|Reviews for One More Step to Losing All Dignity|
| nottherenow chapter 1 . 12/1/2009
Can I just say-I love this story. It is funny and well written. The characterisation is well done and you can imagine Embry reacting this way. His internal monologue is just hilarious-esp. "my dignity just ran away. I swear, I saw it get up and leave." and listing Leah as a reason that his life sucks. That one is selfexplanatory.
Carlisle's concern at the end is a nice touch, and just how he probably would react.
It is a unique story, based on a paragraph in the books I had all but forgotten-congratulations. Now the only question I have is-why did it take me so long to find it? I applaud you. I am eagerly waiting for more things your insane psychotic brain comes up with.
| MRS.CULLEN1122 chapter 1 . 9/20/2009
WOW I REALLY LOVED THIS IT WAS SO FUNNY UR AMAZING
| ForksintheRoad chapter 1 . 8/31/2009
I really enjoyed your story, and am only sorry I didn't run across it sooner. Good job describing how one of the pack and Carlisle would have to interact carefully to avoid triggering each other's instincts.
| JoeBob1379 chapter 1 . 7/30/2009
Wow! That was excellent! I LOVE it! Lol, poor Embry :)
"Dr. Acula" Hahahaha! Scrubs!
| dudeett chapter 1 . 7/30/2009
keep it comin dude
| lurker234 chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
Me likey a lotte; nice idea and well written, very funny
| Allora Gale chapter 1 . 7/17/2009
Awe. Fantastic. So cute. Loved it.
| Smileyfaceofevil chapter 1 . 7/16/2009
I loved it! Brilliant, excellent, great! Anyway, it was edited well, which made it easy to read, and it was well written with a good, and funny, plot.
| Cheerleaders21 chapter 1 . 6/30/2009
this is a really good story!
| spinningleaves chapter 1 . 6/3/2009
An idea I hadn't considered- but I loved it! Haha especially listing Leah as the 4th reason his life sucked, and switching to Carlisle's point of view to show his genuine concern about the pack's sleep. Cute!
| sleepallday chapter 1 . 5/26/2009
Good idea! I really enjoyed reading this.
| Eowyn77 chapter 1 . 5/11/2009
What a brilliant fic idea! :) Loved the line "I needed a bigger wedding ring." I actually snickered out loud at that, along with "Maybe a bring your wife to work day could be arranged for me." :)
The whole situation was hysterical, but I particularly loved Embry's tangent about the juice box. Cracked me up! And the physical...AWKWARD! I'm about to pass out from sleepiness myself, but I had to stay up to read and review. :)
The paragraph about "consoling the situation" misused a few words, but really, this fic was great! Keep writing! :)
| missmuse chapter 1 . 4/27/2009
this is a really interesting story. it is an angle that never occurred to me. i thought the part about the juice box was quite funny and the interaction between embry, his mother and carlisle was very in character.
| starbritt816 chapter 1 . 4/25/2009
I thought that was really funny. I love the wolf pack, and I loved the way you wrote inside of Embry's head!
| DobbyWobby chapter 1 . 4/24/2009
amazing. i love it. all the charecters are perfect and i love seeing more of the wolves, apart from Jake they aren't in the books that much. really good!