|Reviews for One More Step to Losing All Dignity|
| juniper294 chapter 1 . 4/15/2009
This was so amazing! It made me feel bad for him and laugh and smile and everything! You are really good at keeping the voice in charecter and feeling emotions throughout. very well done
| DeepCrimson76 chapter 1 . 4/15/2009
Um, why do you keep saying that your writing sucks? It seems really good to me. Loved this one.
| Kim chapter 1 . 4/15/2009
Wow, great story and totally original! I could so have seen this happening in the twilight series cuz it totally makes sense. I love it when Embry says "bite me" to Carlisle! Totally hilarious!
| YourDarkMistress chapter 1 . 4/14/2009
aww... that was cute. Embry is my favorite wolf, and I always feel so bad that he never told his mom about him being a wolf, even though I think he will eventualy. Your story was just...adorable. There realy is no other word for it. Keep on writing!
| ES3 chapter 1 . 4/14/2009
Neat, I liked reading this from both sides.
| Petuniac3 chapter 1 . 4/14/2009
Love it-especially stern Carlisle
| Jill Cohen chapter 1 . 4/14/2009
hey. This was good! Actually it made me curious as to what a conversation between jacob and carlisle would be like? Carlisle would definately be siding with Edward, but what would he say to Jacob in Edwards defence and all that? But, of course whatever he'd say, it'd be very proper and mature, not like the pissing contest Jacob would want it to be... Argh! you got me curious!
| story2tell chapter 1 . 4/13/2009
That was absolutely wonderfully written! Well done!