Reviews for The Rookie |
---|
![]() ![]() ![]() I've just rediscovered this series after a long absence and I can't wait to finish it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i am amused. If I have one nitpick, it's that the strings of numbers can wear on you. It's a story about computers. what can you do? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great job! You continue to produce awsomeness |
![]() ![]() ![]() Its been a wild ride. Thanks for your informative and thoughtful chapters. I can't wait for your next project. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Mega awesome story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Congradulations! Ending is leaving a space for variety of his actions and fates, and I love it a lot. I like unclear finals, because life is going on. What I like in 838 most of all - that is his belief he is just fulfilling his purpose while he is still behaving his own way :) And he can be good poker player, yes... I feel pity for Cass, though. She had a dream, and not so bad one John might be thinking. But I can't accuse 838 for killing her. It was his mission and he does have something like pride (even if he thinks otherwise). The very end is reminded me of the "The Chronicles of Riddick" ending, when Riddick sat down at the Lord Marshal's throne and said that what belonged to the killed one is yours now. Nya! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whe )) He survived, I just knew that. Three chapters per a time, it's cool ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. I like Carson's thinking, he is far more rational than John (if John's attitude is as flawed as Carson said)... And 838 is happy, maybe :D He was not in consciousness when all his world and life have gone upside down. |
![]() ![]() Coolness! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So now everythings out in the open. I hope this doesn't mean that we're almost at the end. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sorry I haven't reviewed as often as I've visited. Love your work. It will be interesting to see what you do with Cassandra. Will she continue as the cybernetic femme fatalle or will 838 throw her off her game? |
![]() ![]() ![]() 105, Davey... *whips*... And now 838. They will reprogram him or kill him? Great chapter, and it will probably comes to the end? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful, as always ;) Three last chapters look very pro,ising... and again I admire with 105-Freddie's existentialist pondering. It will be pity to lose him. In terms of "alignment system" he can be classified as "chaotic-neutral"... I'm waiting for MOAR. |
![]() ![]() what a recycler. are there be more them to come. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'am back again there :) "Awesome" can't describe it! It's more than just awesome... I'll copy the previous reviewer and say that your portrayal of the story world is very good. I love to read "fan-extended versions" of my favourite fandom universes! *snickers: hehehe, because I write such by myself too* Poor 105-Freddy... (yes, I develop emotional attachments, for machines too, especially for your characters). Those monsters want to dismember him beyong he already was! That's terrible... |