Reviews for The Rookie
Thresher chapter 2 . 6/30/2014
I've just rediscovered this series after a long absence and I can't wait to finish it!
patrick mcclellan chapter 35 . 11/7/2011
i am amused.

If I have one nitpick, it's that the strings of numbers can wear on you. It's a story about computers. what can you do?
Hat O' Doom chapter 45 . 4/2/2010
Great job! You continue to produce awsomeness
axel100 chapter 47 . 3/29/2010
Its been a wild ride. Thanks for your informative and thoughtful chapters. I can't wait for your next project.
Kate-fan chapter 47 . 3/26/2010
Mega awesome story
MountainBlade chapter 47 . 3/25/2010

Ending is leaving a space for variety of his actions and fates, and I love it a lot. I like unclear finals, because life is going on.

What I like in 838 most of all - that is his belief he is just fulfilling his purpose while he is still behaving his own way :) And he can be good poker player, yes...

I feel pity for Cass, though. She had a dream, and not so bad one John might be thinking. But I can't accuse 838 for killing her. It was his mission and he does have something like pride (even if he thinks otherwise).

The very end is reminded me of the "The Chronicles of Riddick" ending, when Riddick sat down at the Lord Marshal's throne and said that what belonged to the killed one is yours now.

MountainBlade chapter 45 . 3/24/2010
Whe )) He survived, I just knew that.

Three chapters per a time, it's cool ;)
MountainBlade chapter 41 . 3/19/2010

I like Carson's thinking, he is far more rational than John (if John's attitude is as flawed as Carson said)...

And 838 is happy, maybe :D He was not in consciousness when all his world and life have gone upside down.
Pinkie chapter 39 . 3/15/2010
axel100 chapter 39 . 3/15/2010
So now everythings out in the open. I hope this doesn't mean that we're almost at the end.
axel100 chapter 38 . 3/15/2010
Sorry I haven't reviewed as often as I've visited. Love your work. It will be interesting to see what you do with Cassandra. Will she continue as the cybernetic femme fatalle or will 838 throw her off her game?
MountainBlade chapter 39 . 3/14/2010
105, Davey... *whips*...

And now 838. They will reprogram him or kill him?

Great chapter, and it will probably comes to the end?
MountainBlade chapter 37 . 3/5/2010
Wonderful, as always ;)

Three last chapters look very pro,ising... and again I admire with 105-Freddie's existentialist pondering. It will be pity to lose him. In terms of "alignment system" he can be classified as "chaotic-neutral"...

I'm waiting for MOAR.
rr chapter 35 . 3/3/2010
what a recycler. are there be more them to come.
MountainBlade chapter 32 . 2/10/2010
I'am back again there :)

"Awesome" can't describe it! It's more than just awesome...

I'll copy the previous reviewer and say that your portrayal of the story world is very good. I love to read "fan-extended versions" of my favourite fandom universes! *snickers: hehehe, because I write such by myself too*

Poor 105-Freddy... (yes, I develop emotional attachments, for machines too, especially for your characters). Those monsters want to dismember him beyong he already was! That's terrible...
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