Reviews for Horizon
Guest chapter 1 . 6/6/2016
This story need to be cut in half unneccerily long and boring their kissing and smiling in each chapter take atleast 4k words and useless conversation edit it plssssssssssssssssssssssssss
Guest chapter 1 . 3/5/2016
Read this a few years back now I've came upon it again noticing its kinda corny lol
Nate chapter 30 . 12/24/2015
I read to kill a mocking bird and felt like I was reading the worst crap ever published
Dante chapter 19 . 12/24/2015
I guess Jacobs middle name is kind
Guest chapter 12 . 4/14/2015
And also morphine is not an epidural. Morphine is not in am epidural either. There is no reason at all that giving her morphine would make her not be able to feel any thing from the waist down
Guest chapter 12 . 4/14/2015
Where are you getting all this stuff about having to be fully dilated before they can perform a c-section and they can't give her morphine until she's farther along? People do not have to be in labor to have a c-section much less be fully dilated. And yo I can have all the morphine you want early on in labor it's LATER that it gets dangerous for the baby and you can't have any more
Guest chapter 8 . 3/5/2015
Is a pretty good story despite the fact that you have a lot of your facts messed up like with the people's stories (esmes and jaspers, Rachel and Rebecca) but a lot of the time you leave us to guess who is talking. That gets annoying. But it's good compared to most of the stories out there
Guest J chapter 33 . 1/25/2015
I really really loved this and the previous installment! I can't wait for the next.

I thought your story progression was just right - never left me feeling like I didn't get enough. The characters were also developed perfectly.

I did think that there were a few too many sex scenes, but for the most part they were well placed and beautifully executed - graphic without getting vulgar.

The reviews of this so far seem ridiculous! so much hate for such miniscule things. I enjoyed your story better than SM's! Sure, there were some spelling mistakes, a few errors in consistency, and confusion about certain things, but that's nothing to freak out over.

Thanks so much for this!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/25/2015
DarkMoon2222 chapter 32 . 12/4/2014
great part 2 cant wait to read the 3rd enstallment
Jubilee Stone chapter 7 . 6/6/2014
Honestly can't count the number of times I've rolled my eyes at your incessant (and, quite honestly, ignorant) racial commentary but other than that, I like it so far.
Guest chapter 7 . 4/12/2014
You use a lot of racial slurs in this story. I think I will stop reading this now. Too bad, I was actually enjoying this story.
Nameoffended chapter 1 . 12/20/2013
Wtf is with the satanist she's creepy an offensive to to much reference to anti-christ satan is no god sub her with a warlock or something and find another shocked line other than oh god and omg come on the first book wad boss till school
Amber chapter 11 . 9/17/2013
Where did you get Nessie aging until her late 20's from? She stops growing at 18. When she reaches full maturity. Why make things up? Just stick with what really happens. And lay off all the criticism to gay people like seriously. The amount of gay jokes in these stories are so offensive. Like stop with the hate man. I'm done. I can't read this anymore.
luv4jake chapter 32 . 7/19/2013
I love Kevin already. That was a rough pregnancy. He's the perfect blend of Edward and Jacob.
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