Reviews for Incinerator
Guest chapter 1 . 2/27/2013
can you write more Please!
abii chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
:) i liked it though i would have prefered it longer :o
RumbleRoarluvsmagic chapter 1 . 8/30/2011
Really funny! Love the whole Tina referance! You dont see that often!
Channyrules chapter 1 . 10/31/2009
Are u going to write more! Because I really do want u to!
MissLisaBennett chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
It's kind of... nothing. Also I'm pretty sure he did not 'rape' his arms around Mia; something you definatly should have noticed. This story had no conflict and in every story there HAS to be a conflict; no matter how small. You write nice but you need to adapt your writing to a real story.

~MisLis~
GHSNEKO chapter 1 . 8/12/2009
Good riddance. That damn book caused way too much trouble.

Love, Neko-chan
Isabella chapter 1 . 5/28/2009
wow its gud bt please rite more nd long
Colored-Chrome chapter 1 . 5/27/2009
I have to agree with ugh on this one... Sorry, bebz!
ugh chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
'I stated as he raped his arms around me,'

rape 1 (rāp)

n.

The crime of forcing another person to submit to sex acts, especially sexual intercourse.

I believe the word you are looking for is 'wrapped'.

Please, learn to spell check.

There were ridiculous errors in this short piece.
dogsfly chapter 1 . 5/16/2009
lol
lucreziatargaryenn chapter 1 . 5/4/2009
Aw!

thats so sweet!

Love it!

:)
fan chapter 1 . 5/1/2009
omg that was so good i cant wait to reaed more
HopelesslyLostInRomance chapter 1 . 4/15/2009
omg lolz i thought she'd get mad or something but i like this reaction better! lolz!