Reviews for The Unexpected Visitors
sweetlilsunshine chapter 8 . 7/30/2012
Wouldn't Voldemort have reigned in terror for 13 more years though? Anyway, good story.
cryptologicalMystic chapter 4 . 6/29/2011
I don't really mind cliffies unless they're at the end of the published chapters and the author hasn't updated in 6 months or more.
Ferretess xxx chapter 8 . 12/21/2010
i loved this story! :)
hysterekal00 chapter 8 . 10/31/2010
That was so sweet! I loved the ending the best- great job over all!
Luiz4200 chapter 8 . 4/20/2010
What became of Dumbledore and Snape? And what are the full names of Harry's children at this new timeline?
ChristinaAngel chapter 8 . 2/3/2010
I like this version of time travel story with how Lily and James met their grandkids, although I think there would have been slightly more debate over to what to tell them. The way they find out about Harry's future is good, I don't think they would be clumsy enough to let something slip but if Lily and James overheard something that made them suspicious, James, Al and Lily could have been forced to tell them.

I thought it was just going to be a quick tale about the grandkids getting to know their grandparents but you actually changed the future. I liked seeing the snippet of the new future although I am curious about the prophecy related to Harry when he didn't have the scar, did the prophecy change or something? Nice way of changing the future every so slightly.
DukeBrymin chapter 2 . 10/26/2009
If the kids' last name was Potter, then it's rather obvious that it's their father who was Lily's and James' kid.
nightwing27 chapter 8 . 8/3/2009
wow good end to a good story too bad it ended short but at least harry got a better childhood this time
nightwing27 chapter 7 . 8/3/2009
oh yea just what I like a different future kind of funny names they have now
nightwing27 chapter 6 . 8/3/2009
man not another dumb not changing anything good chapter
nightwing27 chapter 5 . 8/3/2009
all my stories will have them alive I hate everything about folloowing the books of them being dead good chapter
nightwing27 chapter 4 . 8/3/2009
I really hate the whole dumb saying don't change the future or it will mess up everything to me it's bull shit and a myth good chapter
nightwing27 chapter 3 . 8/3/2009
good chapter
nightwing27 chapter 2 . 8/3/2009
good chapter
nightwing27 chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
wow cool time travel I hope it's about chainging the future I really hate all those time travel stories were they don't. good start can't wait to see how lily reacts that she is their grandmother
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