Reviews for Mirror Me
Guest chapter 1 . 4/8/2014
That's a first a comparison fic about FF Squall and KH Squall/ Leon. They both had to suffer in their own way, thought in FF he grew up into a prick with abandonment issues and he thinks more than that e talks. In KH he became a grown up serious person who talk more, thinks less and abandoned his name because of opposite of each other. I like FFVIII Squall more, I guess because he acts like an ass what makes him funny especially when he called Laguna a clown. His own dad, too bad he doesn't know, then again if he knew he probably wouldn't acknowledge Laguna a his dad. XD

xxxDreamingflowerxxx
Guest chapter 1 . 9/20/2012
How can I say this? You mirrored this nicely. It just...flows nicely.
WishingDreamer5 chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
This was so beautiful, so heart breaking, sad and beautiful that it almost made me cry. It made me feel so incredibly bad for him, even though I know it never happened. This is my favorite sad piece you wrote and it certainly is in the top 5 of the best fics I've read about him.
RainFlame chapter 1 . 4/13/2010
Beautifully written :) I enjoyed it.
Terikel chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
This story makes me feel uneasy. Sad. Poor Leon...
ursurp chapter 1 . 12/24/2009
Wow, that was wonderful, how much they contrasted.

While one got a happy ending, the other was... heartbreaking.

Especially since the happy ending was the one with the emotionally intense/serious/dark(?) story line, and the other one was the one with constant smiles/cute characters/goofy main character and Disney!

Brilliant potrayel of the same person in different universes.

Though, you did leave me puzzled on the roles of the characters. I understand that in the FF universe, his best friend is Zell. Okay.

And in the KH universe, his best friend is Cloud. Got it.

And I was pretty sure the person that "Pulled Faces" at him was Yuffie, and the next KH paragraph was Aerith, until it was mentioned that "no matter his desire to see her would not bring her back" or around those lines.

That left my poor naive/dim-witted self confused, sadly.

Was it a KH version of Rinoa (on both accounts or one?), or prehaps I was correct the first time and Im just being stupid?

ANYway, I am gonna favorite because it is truly wonderful and because of my terrible/long/terribly long review/reviewing skills. Truly sorry.
DarkangelGuard77 chapter 1 . 12/18/2009
Wow, thats good. Is the other girl supposed to be Aerith? Or is it an alternate Rinoa? Great story
Raberba girl chapter 1 . 9/21/2009
The last paragraph was wonderful, especially coming right after the previous one.
heylalaa chapter 1 . 9/5/2009
this is really good. another astonishing fic from you. xD

thanks for the read!
sheartrigger chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
This has to be one of the best Squall/Leon stories I've read so far.

I think you portrayed the character very, very well. And I'm not saying that just because he's my favorite. :P

This is an amazing story. Great job!
Cere chapter 1 . 7/21/2009
Very, VERY well written. But just so you know, at the end of Kingdom Hearts II, during the credits, Leon/Squall opens a note from which a butterfly suddenly appears, signaling that the letter is from Rinoa and that she is still very much alive somewhere in the KH universe. :)

Keep it up!
ninjafairygirl chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
dude! that was amazing! i 3 squall!
awaylaughing chapter 1 . 6/27/2009
This was beautiful. Paragraphs 1 through 4 seemed to make the most impact on me, and I loved the bit about Rinoa in paragraph 7. I don't particularly like her, but she was stronger then people give her credit for.

Very touching, I love it.
DaughterOfSorceress-Lion chapter 1 . 6/24/2009
So very sad and so very well written. The contrast here is so great it's amazing. Well done. And I also have seen that work of art... genius I thought. This goes well with it... so very sad...
Sorikaii chapter 1 . 6/10/2009
I am reduced to a case of the Flapping Jaw. Combining KH and FFVI-well, that's just the best idea ever, especially with a character in common. And then, adding the similarities without actually having him discuss them, obviously unaware of the alter ego in both cases-pure genius in a format. And so in character! No one writes him in character, and in both of them!

All I just said can be reduced down to fjidoa;fdsoioa;hfdsha;fdsfkdl;a;fds and say about the same thing. Phenomanal.

-Ali
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