|Reviews for His Personal Assistant|
| Haylzi chapter 11 . 4/24/2009
I just found this story and read the whole thing im so happy they finally kissed I hope you dont stop the flirting/tension banter between them it makes them sexy as hell cant wait to see what he has in store for her tomorrow theres lot of foreplay to be had haha, update soon lovin it :)
| EdwardsCandyCane chapter 11 . 4/24/2009
That was the perfect first kiss for them, and damn it I want to car pool with Edward!
| CallaChrisCat chapter 11 . 4/24/2009
ok, you totally earned this review! I LOVED that chapter! I think I may need to start carpooling now... *sigh*
| meggo chapter 11 . 4/24/2009
oh thank god for carpooling.
| Navygirl14 chapter 11 . 4/24/2009
OMFG I laughed my ass off. That was funniest thing I ever read. Bella is hysterical and Edward is the epitome of sexual repression. That kiss was hot - I think I got a little overheated myself. I need a cold shower. What the hell am I going to do when they take it further. Good Lord help me. This story is great and I love that Jasper and Emmett are helping her. I love Edward in this story. Can't wait to read what happens next.
| HMOM chapter 11 . 4/24/2009
Very, very hot! Loved every minute of it.
| littlestarinthesky chapter 11 . 4/24/2009
Love it, love it, love it! More please!
| Love Angelic Sin chapter 11 . 4/24/2009
Ooh, I just love how Bella is such a cocktease, and Edward is (mostly) oblivious to it because she keeps taking blows to his manly pride.
The first kiss was just HOT, and I would welcome that kind of distraction from my fear of elevators from Sexward anyday. ;)
| icefang7 chapter 11 . 4/24/2009
whoohoo! yeah! lol thanks for another great chapter! can't
wait for more!
| NatesMomma chapter 11 . 4/24/2009
LOL! “As if you don’t know, you walking Alp.” So funny!
Oh, holy hell, I did not foresee their first kiss to be so primal. Loved it!
Although, I have to say that as I was reading, I was nervous that nothing was going to happen in the elevator because he was being so friendly and casual when they were waiting for it. You are doing a great job keeping this story ambiguous. I don’t know if ambiguous is the right word. I’m saying that you are writing this story in a way that I can never anticipate what is coming next! Thank you! Keep it up!
| Idiots called Friends chapter 11 . 4/24/2009
| piperspal chapter 11 . 4/24/2009
Yowza! Don't worry about it taking a while to get to the lemony goodness...sometimes the teasing is just as, if not more effective! And you are very good at it!
| MAR17ian chapter 11 . 4/24/2009
now i normally don't review because well i can't think of anything to say but you're pretty much blackmailing me here! Please keep writing and keep up with the sexual frustration competition cause it's leaving me in stitches. which is possible not a good thing as i keep getting funny looks from my family but screw them i'm enjpoying this to much. There is that a proper review or does me waffling not count?
| akiyan chapter 11 . 4/24/2009
consider your reviews doubled! :) Talk about sexual frustration... Love the story.. Update! .
| hollandlilies chapter 11 . 4/24/2009
This story is hot! If I had a boss like that I would spend every second on the elevator even if I was terrified of it. The kissing was perfect because like you said they have way too much sexual frustration going on. Can't wait for you to let them get it out.