Reviews for babysitting bella cullen style
LKV chapter 1 . 4/30/2012
Hmm... I can,T really remember Tanya being a mean character, but t hat's just me
emovampyreseer chapter 2 . 5/10/2010
LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!
fresh-BLOOD-was-drawn-2night chapter 2 . 4/3/2010
lol

awesome story
LAURA chapter 3 . 1/3/2010
no.. dont post it... it sounds pretty lame.. sorry
LAURA chapter 2 . 1/3/2010
WTF? vanessa hudgens? Bella would never ever choose that artist... C'mon... but besides that.. it was pretty funny story so thanks... but be serious - say okey ? :D:D
lexi chapter 3 . 10/23/2009
UPDATE
lips-like-morphinee chapter 3 . 8/11/2009
update soon plz
LoveLifeHopeHappiness chapter 2 . 8/3/2009
just great, did a great job here!
awesomenessisme chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
Hello,

A piece of advice - get a beta.

Thanks.
augustleo chapter 2 . 7/22/2009
thx 4 not blocking anonymous peeps like me! great story i hope u get 10 reveiws soon!
MissHaleCullen chapter 2 . 7/15/2009
It's good but it should be longer- an actual story ( not little stories bout the babysitting. But i love the endings wen edward always comes back.
Mel chapter 3 . 7/15/2009
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Murder-City chapter 1 . 7/15/2009
Emmett is Out-Of-Character. So is Edward. And Bella as well. There is no need for Bella to scream at Emmett for such a large amount of times. And Edward NEVER does call Bella "Bells". That is Jaco's nickname for her.

Your story does not fit the title, because everything is "out-of-order". You have poor language skills, and this is an impeccable paradigm of shitfic. Either you write properly, or quit writing.
Murder-City chapter 2 . 7/15/2009
Vanessa Anne Hudgens- your favourite artiste of Bella's favourite artiste? Terrible choice of songs here.

Your story is riddled with language flaws, your punctuations simply pathetic and your plot is simply horrendous. Bella is OOC, so are Emmett and Jasper. For instance, I see no reason why the usually congenial vampires need to scream at Bella to announce their desire to sing in the first place.

You need to start reading, stop immersing yourself in fantasy and crawl out of your little cocoon you dwell in for a change. Get started learning and improving, because you are abysmal. Either you put effort into writing, or you don't write at all.
rockstar87 chapter 3 . 7/15/2009
sup dude i love your baby sitting stories man the r sick !

love them
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