Reviews for babysitting bella cullen style
YahiKonaNagato21 chapter 2 . 8/23/2016
YahiKonaNagato21 chapter 1 . 8/22/2016
Underastarrysky chapter 1 . 4/30/2012
Hmm... I can,T really remember Tanya being a mean character, but t hat's just me
emovampyreseer chapter 2 . 5/10/2010
fresh-BLOOD-was-drawn-2night chapter 2 . 4/3/2010

awesome story
LAURA chapter 3 . 1/3/2010
no.. dont post it... it sounds pretty lame.. sorry
LAURA chapter 2 . 1/3/2010
WTF? vanessa hudgens? Bella would never ever choose that artist... C'mon... but besides that.. it was pretty funny story so thanks... but be serious - say okey ? :D:D
lexi chapter 3 . 10/23/2009
lips-like-morphinee chapter 3 . 8/11/2009
update soon plz
LoveLifeHopeHappiness chapter 2 . 8/3/2009
just great, did a great job here!
awesomenessisme chapter 1 . 8/2/2009

A piece of advice - get a beta.

augustleo chapter 2 . 7/22/2009
thx 4 not blocking anonymous peeps like me! great story i hope u get 10 reveiws soon!
MissHaleCullen chapter 2 . 7/15/2009
It's good but it should be longer- an actual story ( not little stories bout the babysitting. But i love the endings wen edward always comes back.
Mel chapter 3 . 7/15/2009
Murder-City chapter 1 . 7/15/2009
Emmett is Out-Of-Character. So is Edward. And Bella as well. There is no need for Bella to scream at Emmett for such a large amount of times. And Edward NEVER does call Bella "Bells". That is Jaco's nickname for her.

Your story does not fit the title, because everything is "out-of-order". You have poor language skills, and this is an impeccable paradigm of shitfic. Either you write properly, or quit writing.
28 | Page 1 2 Next »