this was and is a great story! Thanks for doing a a great one with a female naruto!

Good fanfic! I've always loved Naruko in Japanese doujinshis, but in fanfictions she is often just too much girly and OOC. But yours is great, congratulations! And Sasuke asking for go to the mission instead of Naruko, aaawwww... I almost cried from the emotion.

Take care and continue writing great fanfics like this

PS: Oh, and Sai lines were simply awesome xDDD

is it just me or is the sex with a female naruto wilder than with a male one? XD

*squeee* Aw, so sweet of him to go on her mission :)

Love your stories :D

This story is so cute! Please write a multichapter Naruko fic. There are hardly any good gender swaps with Naruto and if anyonecan pull it off it's you. Youre so big in the Naruto fandom, like every site I go to recs you.

Hehehehehe, slightly fucked up, but still fun _

Cute cute cute!

Okay, so the fandom world is very, very small. I follow yocching on deviantart, have for a while, I've also followed you for a few years over here. I've never had an interest in Naruko, they're always written terribly. However, browsing through yocching's gallery, I stumbled upon her fanart of this story that I missed back in 2009. The artwork was so pretty, I clicked on the summary and woe and behold she was pimping your work. Very cool :)

Regardless, loved this one shot, though I'm quite glad it's a oneshot. It has a nice feel to it. Your Naruko was quite good, and you actually made me like her a little (don't tell Naruto, haha).

Thanks for a good read. (P.S. Listened to my Vertical Horizon cd in my car today and though of you and your story on the way home from work, so it was all kind of oddly ironic that I read this and found that fanart).

~DaitaiOtonashiiOokami

On behalf of a writer, I know how important it is to receive some sort of reviews from people after something that you've poured yourself into, whether it was an hour or a week... and I figured that I've probably read this one about twelve times and it's probably about time I actually left a review telling you that I LIKE the story enough to read it said twelve times.

I think that you have a fantastic way with words and the astonishing ability to take the Naruto characters and keep them IN character while still somehow twisting them beyond reason. This story is probably one of my more favourite examples of this. I generally avoid Naruko, as most people write her... off. You, fortunately, use your brilliant brain and manage to capture her in all of her boyish awesomeness.

In fact, I would LOVE to see some sort of random two shot prequel about some of their missions when they were younger. I personally love the idea of Sasuke/Sai/Naruko in a team... jeebus that'd be funny. I can't think of a more infuriating situation for Sasuke, being that Sai could probably steal her attention in a matter of seconds and that would right piss Sasuke off.

I also really liked the idea of Sasuke dating all the girls BUT Naruto and Hinata. I love how you included Hinata in the exclusion... as completely messed up as the english in that sentence was. I love this little world that you've managed to paint in like... under five thousand words. In comparison to a lot of fics that just sort of... have a 'take it or leave it' mentality, I can honestly SEE your world being an alternate reality.

AHAHA! Now I want to see a double reality fic with a Naruko and a Naruto with the two Sasukes being all like... 'wtf! MINE!', and dealing with all the overlapping crap. TEEHEE, CHAOS!

Anyway... I'll stop my incoherent ranting now, but I really wanted to tell you that I love your characterization and that you have a fantastic ability to paint an awesome scenario with a believable world, and that I think it's fantastic that you can do it with as few words as you did.

Thank you very much for writing!

Cheers!

Bligy

For a Naruko story, this is by far the most Naruto-like I've read. Good joh.

Yay roses-san!

Aw! Love this! Adorable as hell, especially that last segment from Sakura's point of view. Sai's a funny bastard as usual lol.

Kewt!

I thought it was sweet and loved it!