Omg you need to write more!

i loved it ! :D great one-shot!

Another awesome story! I love it! Keep up the amazing work! xD

OMG! Awesome awesome story! You friends told you to post more for this? They are so correct. I would love to see more of this story. The characters where very nicely written and the reactions and povs where great. Nice omake too!

This is an instant fav

You didn't need to ask, I planned on reviewing after reading that.

What Sasuke did, taking on a mission like that, was very kind of him.

I want to know how the mission turns out fufufufu...

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this was short and sweet and adorable!

gah, i can taotaly imagine this happening...very well written too! not too descriptive but not too short. the smut scene wasnt half of the story,(thankgod, i mean..smut is good but in moderation, you know? whats the point of a story if the said story was only about sex..?) and good amount of dialogue...

i loved sasuke and naruto's voices..., truly adorable!

you know this is the best one shot i ever read vanitywantsyou was my favorite author still kinda is but your winning over her tittle. when you finally update dead last or complete it youl win over the tittle of favorite story ever who until now was ultimate uke syndrome and just like heroin but its on hiatus right now such a brilliant genius story oh well sorry got distracted

now if this was not a one shot i bet that it would get hundred of reviews

thanks for the awesome naruko one shot it was amazing

I must admit, I wasn't sure if I should read it at first, but I read your last chapter of Dead Last and saw the fanart. Because of this, I decided to give it a try(I'm not usually a Naruko fan) and I must saw that I'm surprised!

I really love this fic and I'm happy to have decided to read it

...D'aw...This was so damn sweet! Argh!

Even though it was a little bit out of character. Just a leetle, eensy weensy tiny bit on Sasuke's part. Eheh. But I'm not one to talk. :shrug: I think I'm just too addicted to him being an ass.

Otherwise...it was cute as HELL. I like the way you describe their relationship afterward - it's definitely the way they'd actually be.

~Much glompage! And love. :adoration:

It's such a nice story, if only you'd continue it.

It was a little hard to get around the fact that Narutos a girl in this...but over all this is a nice story.

LOL this was fantastic! It was absolutely brilliant, and i loved it

I like the omake best. Sakura's point of view is delightful.

Thanks for the story! :)

Biwa

Muhahaha! gre8 story. you know your story could have played out like stripped bare. Replace kakashi and sakura with sasuke and naruko add more scene and original changes and voila. An epic!

this is still cool though. Im writing a femnaru/sasuke one myself. Its star-crossed lovers. nice seeing yours though.

Theres always some amusing element or another in your stories, even when the characters get frustrated or angry, or threatening etc, I always find myself snickering a lot. As I did while reading this, add that along with dreamy sighs thrown in every now and then and I was reminded yet again of why this pairing is grand in every way. Something about your possessive Sasuke always seems so sweet. Loving. Really Humane.

Hm, any way no real critiquing, just some pointless babbling.

I'll be on the look out for more