Reviews for One Shot Naruko |
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![]() ![]() This feels more than just a one-shot fic. I hope you chose to continue |
![]() ![]() D Hahaha, this is crack xD Brilliant crack Yup, very good fanart, I think this : yocching./art/Wakaranai-119591572, could totally be your Naruto *love* I hope you're doing well } I'm always looking forward to your updates |
![]() ![]() please don't leave the story at there. I'm going to cry if you do. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You should DEFINITELY write more of this... please? |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL! SHe can be a retard at times. Of course Sasuke would be disgusted. XD I love it! Please, do write a sequel. You're not that mean to leave your readers hanging, right? XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG yes do keep writing its good X3 (you should have had a more detailed lemon... but that is ok if you don't want to)But heck yes continue... seriously you can't leave it like that DX its like a tease... Well if you do Update soon Until next time :3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think you're pretty awesome. I think you're smdnkafbkjasg awesome. Gah. I loved this I loved this I loved this. Oh~ I remember you used to have another Naruko story. I was going to review it, but I think you took it down? Either way, that one was really good too~ *loves* |
![]() ![]() ![]() You can't just leave it at that! I might die if you don't continue this story! This was wonderfully written. I had a bit of apprehension before reading this because I don't really like to read about female Naruto but the story was just so good! I loved it and really hope you continue the story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dude, great one once again XD. Feeling slightly awkward about drawing a fanart before reviewing but, you know I love you right? keke. Glad you finally got Naruko out of your system. w BTW I'm sorry I made Sasuke's throw rug such a bright color, let's pretend he just went through one of those cliche "ooh this reminds me of my love's eyes" thingies in the middle of the store. (and while we're at it lets pretend yocching's not just out to humiliate the guy) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha, this was great! You should most definately continue this, LISTEN TO YOUR FRIENDS! YOU MUST! Um, yeah, I laughed a lot and I really like how you would change POV every now and then between Naruko and Sasuke, it was a very nice touch to your fic, and no, I'm not going to say 'one-shot' as it WILL be a fic (hint-hint) Umm... So... I guess I don't really have anything else to say, so... BYE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I honestly love all your work and think you are a great writer. Keep it up :) Looking forward for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i lol'd so hard xD naruko~smart xD |
![]() ![]() I like how you briefly explained Naruko's and Sasuke's relationship without it being too heavy; the characters' oscillating POVs also helped the story to flow well. But I don't know if it's really up to the reader to decide if you want to continue your own one-shot. However, the only unanswered detail that a couple of us would like to know-and I think that this would particularly drive Sasuke crazy-will Naruko stick to her mission and sleep with someone else? It's almost hard to believe that she would still follow through with her job, although she's a professional shinobi. I think both Sasuke's and Naruko's physical relationship and emotional epiphanies are still too recent and too fresh. They have a history; and at one point they had been awfully close, and then for a long while, they weren't. Now after that dry spell, they're magically together again because Naruko doesn't want to lose her virginity to anyone else...? This is a fun fic, don't get me wrong. It's witty and moving in all the right places. And no matter what you decide, I think that Sasuke's and Naruko's abrupt physical/verbal confessions made sense to the plot because it is a one-shot fic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You ask hard questions! I absolutely loved this, and it would be really cool if you continued it, but I'd rather see more of your other stories. But this was really good, I loved the moment where Naruko couldn't figure out why Sasuke was angry, if was such a Naruto moment. |
![]() ![]() I know you are the princess of SasuNaru fanfiction and all and are used to having loads of reviews, but please don't take this fic down just because it's reviews are not as high... YET. This is one of the very view GOOD Naruko fics out there and it has so much potential. I know you have a lot of fics you are working on right now, and that's cool. But keep this one around. It's awesome. |