I like this story (and Naruko's fic also), but I think that that story would be end as one-shot. I rather like to see new chapters of "Ultimate Uke Syndrome" or "Dead Last", that next chapter of this story. Why? Because in that chapter was everything - I mean, their history, a reason and end of their love story...I think, that if you want connect Naruko with someone else, than Sasuke, that would be a reason to continue... anyways, I will be waitng for your next updates.

Ah, you make me so happy! I love all of your stories! I'm seriously never disappointed when I take the time to read them.

I hope I made your day as you've made mine.

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please continue! i think this is my first naruko story and i absolutely love it! the ending... hahah... i thought it would end in utter confusion (although, it still kinda did, hehe)

I love this one-shot! The plot is interesting as well. I hope you'll post a second chapter! I really love your stories! And your style too! After reading your fanfic Dead Last a few months ago and after reading the description of the Neko Naruto Poster I really felt like drawing it! XD It's such a coincidence - I was just doodling something like that today! XD Do I have your permission to fraw the Neko Naruto Poster? 3 I'll link it to your fanfic so they'll know that the credit is completely yours. ) Oh, by the way, when will you update on Dead Last? I don't want to rush you but the suspense is killing me! XD My deviantart account is clariecandy. )

this would make a really good story!

Hi.

I totally loved this one. Please write more.

yep-please write more!

please!

*begs

hey there. been awhile since you last updated.

and here's the thing... in my own personal opinion:

DON'T write a second chapter. This thing should just remain as a one-shot, you'll need to focus on your other works or else if you keep on writing more and more, but finish less, then you'll end up with tons of unfinished projects, and tons more of disappointed fans.

Trust me, finish your other projects first. It's better in the long run.

I can't believe this is a oneshot,

...tell me there is a second part?

I was just browsing through ff, and when I read your story I completely fell for it.

-omg-This is story is amazing.

I really hope you continue this story.

I like Naruko, but I guess since it's still Naruto's mind, the only good trait about her is her chest. I'm sure the whole I-love-him-but-he-doesn't-love-me-(when the guy actually does)-scenario is familiar in shoujo and yaoi, but it's my least favorite. And I can see how this is a oneshot. The ending will be confessing their love and having more hot smex! I mean, it wouldn't have hurt you to add that one more paragraph at the end there to finish it! I thought this was hilarious, how Sasuke was frank about his lust and Naruko's crude talk about the sexxing.

Dude! I demand a second chapter! Please? Pretty please with a cherry on top?

ha ha.

really funny, and cute.

good job!

Wow... when I started this story I really wasn't in the mood to read neither lemon nor a Naruko fanfiction (even though I don't mind either, it's just late). But wow... it was a really great story. Naruko has a slightly different personality from Naruto (obviously because she's a girl), but it's sweet. I like the fact that she's aware of her own feelings but completely ignorant to Sasuke's. Haha...

The lemon part was played well for the mood I was in. I like how you turned it into a quite humorous lemon at that. It fits that they would do it until they pass out being the first time after they've been 'forced' apart for so long.

I very much like Naruko's relationship with Sai. Even though it seemed slightly out of character for him, it fit well since she was a girl and he still had a perv 'pet' name for her. And the fact that 'Sai' confessed 'his' love to Sasuke... priceless. -laugh-

As for turning it into a chapter story... man, I'd definitely read it if you did, but I'll let you decide depending on the response from your fans. -smile- But, um... please don't delete this as a one-shot regardless of the response you get. I (personally) thought it was really meaningful... and well, I kinda want to see it stick around. -crooked smile-

Ahahahahahaha, that is great. When Naruko/Sai first confessed, Sasuke must have been like... wtf? What the hell is going on? Huh? XD I can only imagine.