Reviews for 21st Birthday
A.S chapter 1 . 10/26/2016
The fuck u are writing?
Are u writing ur english assignment to fill 20 pages.
The fucking thing has no fucking plot,and is utter bullshit.
xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 1 . 4/30/2014
Really awesome oneshot. Love it
Clato321 chapter 1 . 10/3/2013
I LOVED THIS WAY TOO MUCH GIRL, YOU'RE THE BEST WRITER OH GOD
Izsy chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
Oh yeah, if they were married, wouldn't they be living together. Or why is Tenten living with her parents when she's married?
Izsy chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
This is Neji's 21st birthday, right? Neji's a year older than Sasuke, right? And Sasuke has a son who's 8 at the time.

Ummm, wouldn't that mean he had a son when he was 12-13 years old? -_-
ferbfletcherlover chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
one shot :D
KoalaSnow chapter 1 . 9/30/2009
His was good I guess. I don't read many lemons so I really don't know what to say either then great job or something like that :)
Gaarasloveslave chapter 1 . 8/4/2009
OMG! That was so funny! ah, I needed that. Choji has an amazing sense of humor. If I were Naruto though, I would run for the hills! LOLZ! Good story! HAPPY BIRTHDAY NEJI!
FreyaLin chapter 1 . 6/18/2009
lol thats funnie run naruto run!
gunner12 chapter 1 . 6/12/2009
lmao i was laughin at 12 in the morning with this story. its the best
Shenhui chapter 1 . 5/12/2009
This was really really amusing.. 10 virtual cookie for you.. *laughs* I love this story...
ScarlettKunai chapter 1 . 5/11/2009
Cute ending. Haha, Lee-kun was quite in character...
DotsOnAWall chapter 1 . 4/27/2009
"Naruto and I have a meeting."

LMFAO!

I love this storyy. It's very cute and you can see that this could happen with the Hyuga Household.

Dotty
weaponmistressbunny chapter 1 . 4/26/2009
awesome chapter :) was this set after 'losing everything'? i kinda got that feeling. :) omg u haveta write a chapter about what happens to naruto and neji. hehehehe
ohmybeatingspark chapter 1 . 4/20/2009
This...is...perfect. I the part when Shika is like, "Go away and do woman things!" lmao...that's genius!
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