Reviews for The Seeds of Betrayal
rose chapter 1 . 4/1/2010
good start, now finish the story :P
Kyle trouy chapter 1 . 6/13/2009
hey please keep writing! I Love your stories! Oh And thank you! please Keep writing you givin me hours of entertainment!

Yours truly Kyle Trouy.

P.S Seriously please keep making stories! I might be a writer soon. If so I'll tell you.
Sir FK chapter 1 . 4/24/2009
GAH!

This feels like it's going to be deep. A story that reaches into souls.
Lady Arreya chapter 1 . 4/17/2009
Great start! :) I can't wait to see what happens next.
femmefatale2 chapter 1 . 4/16/2009
Of course you should continue! And soon!
one chapter 1 . 4/15/2009
it's an interesting idea, you should continue and see how it plays out.
The Perfect Mist chapter 1 . 4/14/2009
Heck yea continue! I wanna know why Kevins in the null void.. and I wanna see Ben and Gwen! Continue continue continue!
Mr. BG chapter 1 . 4/14/2009
Yes it should. I'm gonna take a wild guess. Gwen kisses Kevin. Ben becomes insanely jealous and sends him to the Null Void? Was I right? Pls continue