|Reviews for Healing of a Broken Heart|
| smalls715 chapter 2 . 5/14/2012
In love! you have to finish it! Hopefully it will turn out bsolutly amazing!
| H.R. Aidan chapter 2 . 6/20/2010
This was an interesting piece. I'm more interested in how Ashleigh is going to deal with her grief and where her support is going to come from. The pace of these first two chapters was good but I would recommend these being made into one chapter - they are short enough to be combined, and can be considered too brief to be split into two. I enjoyed the element of surprise that Ash didn't win the Derby outright - I was expecting her too! However, the clever twist of the filly who does win obviously makes Ash and Pride win by default. Is winning by default going to be an ongoing theme here? It could be an interesting structure if you use it.
On a different note, your dialogue is good - the conversation between Ash and James is particularly good and flows well so well done. Not always easy!
| funinthesun55 chapter 2 . 5/2/2010
please update this-its awesome!
| IAmJustAlone chapter 2 . 9/16/2009
i think the stroy was great
| tryke14 chapter 2 . 6/26/2009
Sort of fast-paced, but it's stiil great:)
| bushy chapter 2 . 5/2/2009
please please please write more
| CowgirlKimmy chapter 2 . 5/2/2009
PLease update...please please please...please! :)
| Katherine Sparrow chapter 2 . 4/29/2009
This story has potential! please continue writing...
| anonymous chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
I really like your story. please update soon!
| Alyxzia chapter 1 . 4/14/2009
Great start, I can't wait to read more. Would I be right in assuming that Brad is the saviour? Anyways, more please :D