Reviews for Waiting For Dinner
InsanityIsClarity chapter 1 . 7/18/2015
This was awesome... The last sentence was my favorite, haha. Great job!
twounderscorethreefour chapter 1 . 7/26/2010
TOO ADORABLE. I love Toko sibling fluff, it's the best. The Zuzu thing! He hates the nickname so much. :D
person-without-a-FF.N-account chapter 1 . 4/2/2010
Aw that's so sibling-ish and fluffy! 3 I think they're all pretty much in character. Please write moar! O You shouldn't eat lip balm! Your skin will go gren!
zutarababe chapter 1 . 4/21/2009
oh great job sokka... xD
zoeyyyyyy chapter 1 . 4/15/2009
I love it! The grammar and everything is freaking sweet and both Toph and Zuko seem perfectly in character... Please continue!
annicaspoon chapter 1 . 4/15/2009
Aw I love this. Yay for Zuko and Toph siblingship! I've always wanted to do a story like this with those two bonding, I've just never gotten around to making any fanfiction yet. But still this is a really cute story.

Typical Sokka, blow up the kitchen XD
WordBirdNerd chapter 1 . 4/14/2009
This is cute. The characterization is spot-on. Good job!

Just to note, the characters in Avatar probably don't use air quotes, since they write in Chinese and Chinese doesn't use the same punctuation.

I have the same problem with not finishing stories, but if you do decide to write more of this I'd read it. You can always keep it open-ended.
Chasse chapter 1 . 4/14/2009
Sweet story...