|Reviews for Code Geass Megiddo|
| ringongbell chapter 21 . 3/6
The fight and battle scenes in this story are magnificent. I didn't think it possible to portray such exciting scenes in prose and with so much detail. I only just encountered this fic, and as a whole the events and characters are well written and the worldbuilding is creatively developed. Pay no heed to all those people decrying the story's departure from canon: departure from canon is the very raison d'etre of fanfiction, and you have re-created your own world and characters beautifully while retaining a lot of what I cherish about Code Geass (while removing some of the weaker elements of canon too, such as the annoying orientalism of the quasi-imperial Chinese Federation and the pitiful doll they made of Tian Zi.)
I do admit, as a speaker of both languages, that I cringe every time you use Chinese and French. But that is only a minor distraction in the overall deft writing. Thank you for your amazing work.
| Guest chapter 10 . 2/3
I just had to point this out, forgive me if someone already did, but the people playing chess, Tayuya and the others, you took them from... Naruto right? Whoa. Naruto and CG, who would have thought?
| SkyBlader chapter 21 . 1/28
I really liked the story in the beginning but as you got on in chapters you seem to ramble all over the place. The vast majority of the side stories were unnecessary and boring. I found myself very quickly skipping any section not on kallen or lelouch. The exceptions to that being the side .China and Toudoh and any sections with the ninja maid.
| AnonAlania chapter 19 . 12/19/2013
I do not know if someone pointed this one out, but Korea being part of the Federation makes very little sense due to Korea being Area16. According to your wikia.
Blunty put, you did not need to limit yourself with the "official" Area system. Which is not even clear (quote: Area 13 in Akito)
Or maybe this is merely my personal bias against that system as latin american (south america only one area? Bull).
But that depends on whatever suits your story the best, not actual politics and ethnicity.
| AnonAlania chapter 17 . 12/16/2013
Regarding the number of deaths from Pearl. I know you copied it from the irl attack on Pearl. But half of those were due to the explosion of ONE battlefield due to the fleet not being there. Your Pearl has the whole fleet, had greater destruction, etc. This without including the advance fleet, other bases and the reinforcements.
| kingrichard360 chapter 13 . 12/16/2013
uh oh I see where this is going. I'm begging you please don't kill lelouch for the sake of the earth he has died to many times without even getting credit for it. can't you keep he alive at least just this time, haven't we lelouch fans suffered enough? great story though
| kingrichard360 chapter 1 . 12/14/2013
damn your psychic this is exactly what's happening in akito the exiled. lelouch and suzaku the ultimate tag team
| DarkJackel chapter 21 . 12/7/2013
I must admit Johann grew on me here. Originally him seeming to be Rule 63 Monica with better piloting skills was a little annoying but the way he played this was beautiful. Using Calares to draw out Xingke's defenses and the tricks he would use to counter Britannian military superiority. Thanks for the work.
| death77 chapter 21 . 11/8/2013
I got to say this is one awesome story. I like its orginality and the world view on this story. I also like the character develpment of each character. The only kinda problem was that the attack on pearl arc was a little dragged out, but its still great. I can't wait till next chapter.
| Kmaster chapter 14 . 10/31/2013
great chapter. update soon
| Aki no hikari chapter 15 . 10/23/2013
I'm really enjoying this fic so far, I just want to point out that you're not being consistent with the number of years that have passed, since at one point you have Kallen say that she's 25 but latter on she's 22, likewise, Tohdoh was saying that the Black Knights spent 5 years on isolation, but before it was 8 years, so which one is it?
| Doctorjaws chapter 10 . 10/22/2013
Re-reading this for the secon time. Still awesome! The level of detail in the attack on Pendragon is superb and I also noticed the "Dark Knight" reference this time. Nice! Also with all his training Lelouch really is "Anime Batman". I should also thank you for carrying on my three favourite ships in the series; LelouchxKallen, GuildfordxConrelia and OhgixViletta (curse you R2). Onto Pearl Harbour again!
| MisterSP chapter 21 . 10/10/2013
Am I the only one seeing the massive problem with Britannia's most well regarded military training facility being the one that, in our world, was founded and run by the Continental Army exclusively? That is to say, Lelouch effectively went to Traitor Academy. It's about as logical as New York still having a Statue of Liberty.
Sure, there's a good chance of there being a Fort Arnold there, but West Point? Surely not in any recognisable fashion.
| Doctorjaws chapter 21 . 10/10/2013
Well I finally caught up with the fic and I've got to say this battle scene is another winner. I also really enjoyed the previous chapter especially the part where Chiba attempts to follow her feelings and it backfires; it's sad but cruelly funny.
I also have a couple of questions;
1 How old is Johann; is he younger than Dorothea and closer to Lelouch's age?
2 Leeroy Jenkins, really?
| Kmaster chapter 21 . 10/8/2013
this is by far one of the best and most interesting fic on code geass I have found on fanfiction. great job. I love the twist u have give to the fic taking it to a whole new leave. this is an excellent work. please update soon.